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Culture One of the pressing issue facing our nation even the public today is the cultural inheritance.As the technology advancing progressively, the public might ignore our distinct cultural treasures. Under such background, I deem that we should adhere to the tradition during the process of follow the cutting-edge fresh things.Firstly, as for the government, it should give publicity to the in-depth understanding to traditional cultures, carry forward intangible cultural heritage as well as preserve material heritage instead of tearing them down for modern buildings. Secondly , as for the whole community, we should make joint efforts to mobilize the entire society to have in-depth understanding of our local customs and practices. As students, we always have intercultural communication with foreign students, we can take advantage of the process to have cross-cultural contact with them in order to understand multiple culture, absorbing the essence and rejecting the dross rather. Thirdly, one can hardly fail to benefit from culture shock and culture diversity, which provide us a broaden horizen. The vital significance for me lies in its integration, which lead me to a complex person rather than a inflexible person with narrow mentality and mindset, removing prejudice and misunderstanding. Exposed to fresh and undated ideas, the intensified cultural communication can bring benefits that prevent cultural devolutuon and extend cultural insights.Briefly, the combination of mainstream culture and conventional culture should endeavor to strike a balance.

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One of the most pressing issues facing our nation even the public today is the threat that technology poses to our cultural inheritance - as the technology advancesing progressively, the public might ignore our distinct cultural treasures.

Under suchWith this background, I deem suggest that we should adhere to the traditions during the process of while still adopting follow the cutting-edge fresh things.Firstly, as for the government, it should give publicity to the promote in-depth understanding toof traditional cultures, carry forward intangible cultural heritage, as well as preserve material heritage instead of tearing them down for modern buildings.

Secondly , as for the whole community, we should make joint efforts to mobilize the entire society to have in-depth understanding of our local customs and practices. As students, we always have intercultural communication with foreign students, and we can take advantage of the this process to have cross-cultural contact with them in order to understand multiple culture, absorbing the essence and rejecting the dross rather.

Thirdly, one can hardly fail to benefit from culture shock and culture diversity, which provide us a broaden our horizons. The vital significance for me lies in its integration, which lead me to a complex person rather than a inflexible person with narrow mentality and mindset, removing prejudice and misunderstanding. [This sentence is confusing - I would break it down and rework.]

Exposed to fresh and undated ideas, the intensified cultural communication can bring benefits that prevent cultural devolutuon[wrong word?] and extend cultural insights.Briefly, the combination of mainstream culture and conventional[wrong word - means pretty much the same as mainstream] culture should endeavor to strike a balance.

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