It's 00:52. I can't sleep after exam of finance and drank a Redbull. My mind is thinking about my recently life. I don't know if I can write it on here. Anyway, I think I need time for a break to thinking.

Second sentence alternative: "I cannot sleep after my finance exam having had a Redbull to drink."

Recent/ly: research the difference between adjectives and adverbs. Adverbs almost always have the "ly" at the end of the word. Adjectives never have the "ly." Adjective are descriptive words that are used to describe the noun. Eg: the blue ball rolled away. The ball was blue.

There/here: "here" is used to describe a place where you currently are at. "There" is used to describe a place where you currently aren't. Eg: My sister is over there next to the tree. I am here, standing in the sun.

Think/ing: go research the present continuous. That may tell you where and when it's used. I don't know how to explain it but I know what it's called and I'm hoping that it will help you.

One other thing is that you used many paragraphs to describe one idea which is incorrect. Use the example of how i have written here. I have a new paragraph for each new idea.

Your punctuation is good. Keep it up. I hope this helps you. Please don't hesistate to ask me if you have any questions? Best of luck! :)

Hi. My name is Ashwaq Aldreai. I am 18 years old. I am studying now in UAEU. I am studying in UAEU now. Today I was finish the first week!! I finished my first week today! (One exclamation mark usually. Use three at most) The time goes running. The time goes by so fast. I was make my weekend schedule before. I made a weekend schedule. I will go to Oman to do a shopping. Also, I will visit my family sure. I miss my mom, dad, brothers and my sisters also. I miss my mom, dad, brothers and sisters too. I love a goratcafe. I sooo love it. Also, sure I will get a lounge sleep to came back my power. (Sorry. I don't understand this last sentence) Also, I have many home work in this weekend and preparing for Arabic classes. I also have lots of homework this weekend. I am preparing for Arabic classes. I hope enjoy in this weekend. I hope to enjoy this weekend.

- Try not to use "also" so often at the beginning of a sentence.

- a space always comes after a punctuation mark, eg: Exclamation, question mark or period (!/?/.)

- Extending a word for emphasis is artistic license. It isn't actually correct written English. You wrote "sooo" when you should just write "so." If you're just texting friends then extending words shouldn't matter. Just don't use it in business or academic writing.

Best of luck at UAEU. Let me know if you have questions. Keep learning and you will do well! :)

When I'm reading Dutch I also think in Dutch. It would be inefficient for me to keep translating everything to myself in English especially if I understand the Dutch any way if that makes sense?

Today is my first day in UAEU. I was meet Mrs.Daniel. (I met Mrs Daniel) Also,I fined (found) a new friend in my class! (Also, I made a new friend in my class.) We were write and did a review with one partner from the class. (We wrote and did a review with one partner from/in the class.) I like the class. I hope to be all the class become my friend with me. (I hope the whole class will become friends with me.) Also, I meet Ms.Louis. (Also, I met Mrs Louis.) She was lovely. We write many things with her. She seed that we have a daily spoiling!!!!! (She said we need daily spoiling! - one exclamation here is enough. Any more is over kill. It is incorrect to use more than three.) It’s ok because we need to practice on writing. I hope get full murk (marks) on all exams and in any activity we will do it.

Notes:

- a space always comes after a punctuation mark and before a sentence unless it's the first sentence. A punctuation mark is for example a period(.), an exclamation mark(!) or a question mark(?).

Eg: The cat is sitting. The cat is on the mat. He is a happy cat.

Do you see the space before the next sentence with each of these sentences?

Sentences are too bunched up without the space. Look: The cat is sitting.The cat is on the mat.He is a happy cat.

It helps to see the difference in the different sentences when reading it.

Let me know whether you have questions. Best of luck with your English. I hope this has been helpful. Good luck at UAEU! <3

The difference lies in whether you do something in general or whether you're currently doing it right now. Eg: "Do you play soccer?" This is asking whether you play soccer generally. "Are you playing soccer?" This is asking whether you are currently playing right now. Eg: "Are you making supper?"(Current) or "Are you making supper right now?" "Do you make supper?" (General) or "Do you ever make supper?" I hope this makes sense :) Don't hestitate to message me if you have any questions? I'll do my best to help.

The line graph demonstrates carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal based on yearly average values. Overall United Kingdom has the biggest/highest value of 1967,1977,1987,1997 and 2007 even its graph's decreasing trend. Conversely, although its trend of increase, Portugal has the smallest values for years in 1967,1977,1987 and 1997. On one hand, it can be seen that (no comma here) the United Kingdom has a regular decreasing trend but Italy and Portugal have regular decreasing trends. In terms of trends, Sweden differentiates from other countries with its fluctuated line. In 1967, Sweden has the average approximate value of 8 metric tonnes per person. In 1997, Sweden average carbon dioxide emission per person reached its peak with approximate value of 10 metric tonnes. Then, it decreased and equalized with Portugal's approximate value of 6 metric tonnes and Italy has the second biggest average carbon dioxide emission per person with approximate value of 8 metric tonnes.

- be sure to put a space after a comma

Otherwise very good :D

Hi, there Between THESE THREE options, which one is right? “Today I ate more than I have eaten/done in my whole life” or “Today I ate more than I have eaten/ have done in my whole life”? Or “Today I ate more than I had eaten/done in my whole life?" Thank you

Now both are correct :) Just be sure to close the entire sentence with the apostrophe with the question mark, fullstop/period, exclamation mark etc on the inside of the apostrophe. Hope that helps. Let me know if yoy have any other questions? I'm happy to help and will do my best to explain.

Same here :) Add me xx