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My name is Ashwaq Aldreai. I am 18 years old.I am studying naw in UAEU [emoji][emoji].Today I was finish the first week!! the time goes running⌛️.I was make my weekend schedule before☺️.I will go to Oman to do a shopping.Also, I will visit my family sure. I miss my mom,dad,brothers and my sisters also[emoji][emoji]. I love a goratcafe[emoji]I sooo love it[emoji]❤️❤️.Also,sure I will get a longe sleep[emoji]to came back my power [emoji][emoji][emoji]. Also, I have many home work in this weekend and preparing for Arabic classes.I hope enjoy in this weekend[emoji][emoji].
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Hi. My name is Ashwaq Aldreai. I am 18 years old. I am studying now in UAEU. I am studying in UAEU now. Today I was finish the first week!! I finished my first week today! (One exclamation mark usually. Use three at most) The time goes running. The time goes by so fast. I was make my weekend schedule before. I made a weekend schedule. I will go to Oman to do a shopping. Also, I will visit my family sure. I miss my mom, dad, brothers and my sisters also. I miss my mom, dad, brothers and sisters too. I love a goratcafe. I sooo love it. Also, sure I will get a lounge sleep to came back my power. (Sorry. I don't understand this last sentence) Also, I have many home work in this weekend and preparing for Arabic classes. I also have lots of homework this weekend. I am preparing for Arabic classes. I hope enjoy in this weekend. I hope to enjoy this weekend.
- Try not to use "also" so often at the beginning of a sentence.
- a space always comes after a punctuation mark, eg: Exclamation, question mark or period (!/?/.)
- Extending a word for emphasis is artistic license. It isn't actually correct written English. You wrote "sooo" when you should just write "so." If you're just texting friends then extending words shouldn't matter. Just don't use it in business or academic writing.
Best of luck at UAEU. Let me know if you have questions. Keep learning and you will do well! :)
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