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First day in UAEU *Today is my first day in UAEU.I was meet Mrs.Daniel.Also,I fined a new friend in my class!. We were write and did a review with one partner from the class. I like the class[emoji].I hope to be all the class become my friend with me.Also, I meet Ms.Louis. She was lovely. We write many things with her. She seed that we have a daily spoiling!!!!![emoji].It’s ok because we need to practice on writing. I hope get full murk on all exams and in any activity we will do it☝[emoji][emoji].

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Today is my first day in UAEU. I was meet Mrs.Daniel. (I met Mrs Daniel) Also,I fined (found) a new friend in my class! (Also, I made a new friend in my class.) We were write and did a review with one partner from the class. (We wrote and did a review with one partner from/in the class.) I like the class. I hope to be all the class become my friend with me. (I hope the whole class will become friends with me.) Also, I meet Ms.Louis. (Also, I met Mrs Louis.) She was lovely. We write many things with her. She seed that we have a daily spoiling!!!!! (She said we need daily spoiling! - one exclamation here is enough. Any more is over kill. It is incorrect to use more than three.) It’s ok because we need to practice on writing. I hope get full murk (marks) on all exams and in any activity we will do it.

Notes:

- a space always comes after a punctuation mark and before a sentence unless it's the first sentence. A punctuation mark is for example a period(.), an exclamation mark(!) or a question mark(?).

Eg: The cat is sitting. The cat is on the mat. He is a happy cat.

Do you see the space before the next sentence with each of these sentences?

Sentences are too bunched up without the space. Look: The cat is sitting.The cat is on the mat.He is a happy cat.

It helps to see the difference in the different sentences when reading it.

Let me know whether you have questions. Best of luck with your English. I hope this has been helpful. Good luck at UAEU! <3

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First day in UAEU

Today is my first day in the UAEU.

I met Mrs Daniel, a new friend in my class! We were writing and wrote a review with one partner from the class. I enjoy the class and I hope that everyone in the class becomes my friend. I also also met Ms Louis, she was lovely. We wrote many things together. She said that we have a daily spoiling! It’s OK because we need to practice our writing. I hope to get full marks on all my exams and I hope in any activity we will achieve results! ☝


Hello Ashwaq, my name is Andrea. This was a great attempt on writing, you just need to focus on the correct word tense, word spelling and also make sure you are using the correct words in your sentences when explaining something. :)


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