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    澳大利亚咖啡文化 - Australia's Coffee Culture

    你们喜欢喝咖啡吗?我非常喜欢喝咖啡。如果早上没喝咖啡,我很难开始工作。(or 很难进入工作状态)

    在澳大利亚,我们有一个咖啡文化(We seldom use '一个' to describe '文化'. Sometimes we use '一种' to describe these abstract words. In most cases, we use adjectives to describe it. For example, you can say '我们有着传统的咖啡文化' or '我们有着深厚的咖啡文化'.)。尤其在墨尔本。我们都喜欢去咖啡店喝意大利风格咖啡。外国人总是以为我们喜欢喝啤酒。对,我们喜欢喝啤酒,但是我觉得我们更喜欢喝咖啡。

    在这里你可以选择几种咖啡比如 cappuccino, cafe latte, flat white, mocha, long black, short black. Cappuccino 和 mocha这两种有(加了)牛奶和一点巧克力。Cafe latte 和 flat white是现磨咖啡和(加 or 兑)牛奶。 Long black 和 short black是现磨咖啡和(加 or 兑)热水,没有牛奶。它是黑咖啡。每个人都有自己的喜好。

    即使我(我虽然 '虽然……但是' is more commonly used.)很喜欢吃巧克力,但是不太喜欢在咖啡里加巧克力。以前我最喜欢喝Latte。Latte 是三分之一浓咖啡要加三分之二泡沫牛奶(想说frothed milk It may be called as '奶泡'). 我不加糖。现在呢,我不太喜欢牛奶的味道。所以目前(The word '目前' is a little formal. '现在' is better.),我一般喝long black不要加糖。

    每天在外面喝咖啡有点贵。一杯大(大份的要花)$4 - $5.我每天喝了三四杯。所以几年前我买了一太 (台) 咖啡机。(它使用起来)很容易,只需要把新鲜的咖啡豆放入咖啡机,然后可以选择哪一种咖啡想喝(做出自己想喝的咖啡种类)。一杯现磨咖啡(的成本)没有超过20 cents. 但是咖啡机有点贵。

    很多人说,“每天喝咖啡对身体不好,会伤害自己(会伤害身体 or 有害健康)”。也有人说,“喝咖啡对身体很健康(好)。我们每天应该喝两三杯吧”。我们应该相信什么?因为我非常喜欢喝咖啡,这就是我的习惯,所以我选择相信,“每天喝几杯咖啡对身体很健康(好)”,哈哈!。
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    February 12, 2019
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    TOEFL writing part: Is staying in a group lead by a tour guide the best way to travel Traveling now becomes a important way for us to spend our holiday, but there is a problem as to whether the best way to travel is in a group lead by a tour guide? From my perspective, traveling with a tour guide is not the best way and the reasons are as follows. Frankly speaking, traveling in a group with a local guide is quite efficient in most situations. Traveling alone sometimes is not that safe, but traveling in a group we have no necessity to worry about our own safety. What is more, arriving a new city we are not familiar with, it is really common for us to lose our direction and it is a hard nut to crack for us to find the way to the tourist attractions. A tour guide is a perfect solution to these problems. Without worrying about taking the wrong way, we can definitely enjoy the beautiful scenery more easily. However, that does not mean that traveling in a group with a tour guide is the best idea for us. Take myself as an example, I went to Beijing last summer with a group and the group had nearly thirty people. Although my safety is ensured, the group was too noisy and crowded for me to enjoy my journey. When we went to the museum, we have to follow the guide's instruction and it is difficult for me to see everything clearly because we have too many people together. Had i not joined this tourist group, I can definitely have a better experience. In addition, tour guide sometime are not that reliable. It is a common phenomenon in our country that the tour guide will lead the customers to some shops to buy souvenirs. The product in these shop are sometimes very expensive but in low quality. The tour guide just make use of our ignorance about the local situation and make money from it, which really harms the customers' interest. Simply put, it is advisable for us to draw the conclusion that staying in a group led by a tour guide is not the best way to travel. Sometime time traveling alone may be a better choice for us to enjoy our journey.
    February 11, 2019
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    TOEFL writing part: Is it better to have knowledge of many subjects than specialize in one subject Study is one of the most essential part of people's lives. However, there remains a problem as to whether having broad knowledge of many academic subjects is better than specialize in one specific subject. From my perspective, it is obvious that having knowledge of various subjects is better. First, having other subjects' knowledge can is beneficial to the study of your major. Taking myself as an example, I am a student of chemistry, but when I entered university, I found out that I need to finish the learning of calculus and physics before taking some advanced courses for the knowledge acquired in these elementary lessons are rather helpful for my further study. What is more, the prosperity of interdisciplinary also requires us to know about different subjects, which makes it easier for us to communicate with researchers of other subjects. If we only focus on a specific subject, our study of our major will be largely limited and we may have problem when faced with projects about interdisciplinary. Second, having the knowledge of other subjects can help us develop the creative thinking ability. Getting knowledge of one subject does not only mean gathering information, it also means learning the specific thinking mode. My professor used to ask me to think about how a subject deals with problems and I learned a lot from it. For example, mathematics taught me to think in a logical way and physics instructed me that hypothesis sometimes is a powerful weapon when solving problems. When it come to chemistry, I learned to build models to simplify the problems. In contrast, it may be hard for us to think out of the box if we only learn about a single subject. Third, having a broad knowledge of many subjects can help students to identify which subjects they are really interested in. Not everyone have a clear dream in their mind when they are students, so a broad knowledge of many subject is quite helpful for them to make up their mind. My roommate learned physics first, but he also took part in many other classes. Then, he found out that programming was his 'true love' so he changed his major into computer science. If students only learn about a specific subject, they may loss the chance to meet the subject they really like. Simply put, it is safe to draw the conclusion that having broader knowledge is better. Having broad knowledge, we can definitely harvest more than what we expect.
    February 9, 2019
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    Is it more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than to learn facts? Understanding concepts and ideas is an essential part in the learning process, but there is a question as to whether it is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than to learn facts. Form my perspective, facts and concepts are equally important and we should devote effort to both of them. First, learning facts is beneficial for us to get a better understanding of concepts and ideas. As a student of chemistry, I used to get confused with the numerous concepts. Many of them have a similar look and it is quite easy to mix them up. Confused by these concepts, it was difficult for me to catch up with the teacher in class and get high scores in various tests. Aware of my problem, my professor shared his learning experience with me. When he was a student, he uses the concepts and the ideas to explain the experimental facts that he met. With the accumulation of relative facts, the relationship between different concepts became more clear, and he found that he can memorize those concepts more easily. I took his advice and in the next term my grade increased dramatically. Concepts and ideas are founded on the base of large amount of facts, so the learning of facts is beneficial for the understanding of concepts and ideas. Second, facts and concepts reveals different aspects of one subject's beauty. Facts are appealing and beautiful while concepts are more logical and rational; both of them can get us interested in the subject. Indeed, the various concepts shows the great wisdom of mankind. They are shining and glorious and provoke our curiosity towards the unknown. However, it doesn't mean that the fact is not beautiful. In a chemistry experiment, it is the fancy color-changing process that attracts our sight. The beautiful facts stimulate our interests toward the subject and give us the incentive to carry on further study which enables us to learn more about the concepts and ideas. As we can see, both concepts and facts play an important role in cognizing the subject's beauty, so it is unfair to regard learning concepts and ideas as something prior to learning facts. Simply put, it is safe for us to draw the conclusion that learning facts and understanding concepts and ideas are equally important. Immersing ourselves in both of them, we will get a better view of what we learned.
    February 7, 2019
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    Will there be fewer cars in the future? Traditionally, people regard car as an important part of their possession and many people tend to buy cars after they get the driving license. However, the problem is that whether the number of cars will decrease in the following twenty years? As far as I am concerned, there will be fewer cars in the next two decades with reasons as follow. First, the advanced transport system in the future can enable people to travel freely without a car. My hometown witnesses a dramatically development in the public transportation in the last ten years. In the past, there were only few buses in operation, but now we have 13 lines of underground and much more buses. The booming of bike-sharing also bring citizens great convenience when they are out. If we want to travel in a long distance in a hurry, we have no choice but to drive our car in the past, while we can choose airplane or high speed rail. In the future, the more and more developed transport system will make it less necessary for people to buy cars. Second, the increasingly environmental pressure will force people to devise new environmental-friendly vehicles to replace cars. The tremendous number of car brings too much pollution to our earth. Although many manufacturer are providing electronic cars, electricity is still produced by the burning of fossil fuel in most area of the world, which release carbon dioxide, along with many toxic gases. In addition, noise pollution caused by the heavy traffic becomes more and more severe. Beside disturbing our lives, it can cause many problems to our physical and mental health. As people attach more and more importance to the protection of our environment, they will chose to purchase for other environmental-friendly vehicles instead of cars. Last but not least, the great amount of cars is a hard nut to crack for the government. The heavy traffic in rush hours everyday adds heavy burdens to the shoulder of the police. The construction of new roads and other relative facilities brings the government great financial pressure and dealing with the pollution caused by the car also cost a lot. Limiting the number of cars and introducing new vehicles can save a great deal of money for the government. Simply put, it is safely for we to draw the conclusion that there will be fewer cars in the future because of the development of transport system, the environmental pressure and the financial pressure of the government.
    February 1, 2019
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    Why do people attend university Nowadays, many people regard university education as an essential part of life, but the reasons for people to attend university vary greatly. As far as I am concerned, having university education can enlarge people’s horizon, promote people’s thinking mode and give people better chance to get employed. First of all, attending university can definitely add to our knowledge. Various clubs are also convenient places where we can develop our new interest. Sharing experience with students from all over the world can give us a glimpse on other cultures. All of these can widen our horizon tremendously. Taking myself as an example, I only know about my hometown before I went to university. However, after I attended university, I have learned a lot about the cultural differences between different regions in our country by now. University is indeed a perfect place for people to enrich their experiences and broaden their horizon. Second, having a university education can promote the thinking mode of people. In universities, classes require students have the ability to think critically. With the continuous training from various classes, we can equip ourselves with critical thinking which may benefit us a lot in our future lives. What is more, universities are place where students are encouraged to share their opinions. In the process of interchanging ideas, we can gradually know how to view a problem from different angles. Last but not least, going to university can enhance the possibilities for people to get hired and get promotion. More and more companies prefer people with bachelor degrees when they are hiring new staffs. Having a university education background gives us and edge over other competitors who did not attend to university. My brother is an experienced Internet engineer, but he dropped out from university because he did not interested in the courses that the university offers. Although he is quite skilled, he found it difficult to get a job in big cities. In conclusion, university is an ideal place for us to enlarge our horizon and promote us thinking mode. The bachelor degree also plays an important role when we hunt for occupations. Attending universities, we will definitely embrace a brighter future.
    January 31, 2019
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    我在超市的收款台付钱的时候,前面的人钱不够了,差了2日元。

    服务员给他自己的零钱拿出自己的零钱帮他垫上。所以他没问题成功付完了钱。

    你相信幽灵的存在吗?
    我相信墓地里存在幽灵。我怕被鬼迷住。

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    August 1, 2018
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    我学汉语。

    大家好!
    现在是六点半。为了录音这个 录象,我已经起床了。我有两个爱好,第一是运动,第二是学汉语。这两件事可以锻炼我坚强的性格。为了及时把一切事都办完我应该少休息多做事。在2010年我跟我的朋友去了中国,在那时候我一个中文句子都不会说。在那次旅游我喜欢上了中国了。回国以后我决定了开始学汉语。我先是自习,然后报名了汉语训练班。在那里我学了一年半的汉语。然后我去了北京首都大学学一个月的汉语。在那时候我更加喜欢汉语。回家以后我怀孕了。生完孩子以后我们搬到了郊区的房子。在那里没有汉语训练班。一开始我打算自习,但是没有空闲时间所以不再学汉语。两年半以后我又生了孩子了。第二个儿子是一岁的时候我决定了继续学汉语。我找到了一位中国学生跟他学习。为了见面他我需要开车去城市,这个花了很多时间。一年半后他毕业了回国去。我想了一想了怎么继续学。然后在网上找到了网课叫“hscake”。在那个训练班开始学我很满意了。因为我每天学得多,知道很多。现在这个训练班就要结束了(We usually use ‘结束了’  rather than ‘完了’. ‘完了’ is often used when something bad happen and we usually avoid using this expression),所以我有一点儿发愁了。希望我会参加下一个训练班。

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    August 1, 2018
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