Why do people attend university
Nowadays, many people regard university education as an essential part of life, but the reasons for people to attend university vary greatly. As far as I am concerned, having university education can enlarge people’s horizon, promote people’s thinking mode and give people better chance to get employed.
First of all, attending university can definitely add to our knowledge. Various clubs are also convenient places where we can develop our new interest. Sharing experience with students from all over the world can give us a glimpse on other cultures. All of these can widen our horizon tremendously. Taking myself as an example, I only know about my hometown before I went to university. However, after I attended university, I have learned a lot about the cultural differences between different regions in our country by now. University is indeed a perfect place for people to enrich their experiences and broaden their horizon.
Second, having a university education can promote the thinking mode of people. In universities, classes require students have the ability to think critically. With the continuous training from various classes, we can equip ourselves with critical thinking which may benefit us a lot in our future lives. What is more, universities are place where students are encouraged to share their opinions. In the process of interchanging ideas, we can gradually know how to view a problem from different angles.
Last but not least, going to university can enhance the possibilities for people to get hired and get promotion. More and more companies prefer people with bachelor degrees when they are hiring new staffs. Having a university education background gives us and edge over other competitors who did not attend to university. My brother is an experienced Internet engineer, but he dropped out from university because he did not interested in the courses that the university offers. Although he is quite skilled, he found it difficult to get a job in big cities.
In conclusion, university is an ideal place for us to enlarge our horizon and promote us thinking mode. The bachelor degree also plays an important role when we hunt for occupations. Attending universities, we will definitely embrace a brighter future.
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Second, having a university education can promote the thinking mode ability of people (or "promote thinking outside the box"). In universities, classes require students to have the ability to think critically. With the continuous training from various classes, we can equip ourselves with critical thinking which may benefit us a lot in our future lives. What's is more (usually we shorten it this way), universities are a place where students are encouraged to share their opinions. In the process of interchanging exchanging ideas, we can gradually know how to view a problem from different angles.
Last but not least, going to university can enhance the possibilities for people to getting hired and getting promoted (or enhance the employ-ability of people and opportunities for career advancement). More and more companies prefer people with at least a bachelors degrees when they are hire ing new staffs. Having a university educational background gives us an d edge over other competitors who did not attend to university. My brother is an experienced Internet engineer, but he dropped out from university because he did was not interested in the courses that the university offers. Although he is quite skilled, he found it difficult to get a job in the big cities.
In conclusion, university is an ideal place for us to enlarge broaden (nooo.... :) ) our horizon and promote us our thinking mode ability. The bachelor degree also plays an important role when we hunt for occupations (or "when we enter the workforce to begin our careers"). By attending universities, we will definitely embrace (or secure) a brighter future.
You wrote really well, I am just being fussy :) . Great work !!!
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Why do people attend university
Nowadays, many people regard university education as an essential part of life, b (better to split here). But the reasons for people to attending university vary greatly (better to add this "from one person to another"). As far as I am concerned, having a university education can enlarge broaden people’s horizon (always broaden/expand/widen ?? horizon. not enlarge), promote people’s thinking mode ability (or encourage creative thinking) and give people better chance to get employed employment opportunities.First of all, attending university can definitely add to enhance our knowledge. Various clubs are also convenient places where we can develop our new interests. Share experience with students from all over the world can give us a glimpse on other cultures. All of these can widen (widen is ok but broaden sounds better I think) our horizon tremendously.
Taking myself as an example, I only knew about my hometown before until I went to university (or I did not know much outside of my hometown until I went to university). However, after I attended university, I have learnt ed a lot about the cultural differences between different regions in within our country by now. University is indeed a perfect place for people to enrich their experiences and broaden (yes you got it :)) their horizon.
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Why do people attend university
I cannot revise your entry. But well-composed. Diploma is job's threshold sometimes I think.
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