Will there be fewer cars in the future？ Traditionally, people regard car as an important part of their possession and many people tend to buy cars after they get the driving license. However, the prob

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Will there be fewer cars in the future？ Traditionally, people regard car as an important part of their possession and many people tend to buy cars after they get the driving license. However, the problem is that whether the number of cars will decrease in the following twenty years? As far as I am concerned, there will be fewer cars in the next two decades with reasons as follow. First, the advanced transport system in the future can enable people to travel freely without a car. My hometown witnesses a dramatically development in the public transportation in the last ten years. In the past, there were only few buses in operation, but now we have 13 lines of underground and much more buses. The booming of bike-sharing also bring citizens great convenience when they are out. If we want to travel in a long distance in a hurry, we have no choice but to drive our car in the past, while we can choose airplane or high speed rail. In the future, the more and more developed transport system will make it less necessary for people to buy cars. Second, the increasingly environmental pressure will force people to devise new environmental-friendly vehicles to replace cars. The tremendous number of car brings too much pollution to our earth. Although many manufacturer are providing electronic cars, electricity is still produced by the burning of fossil fuel in most area of the world, which release carbon dioxide, along with many toxic gases. In addition, noise pollution caused by the heavy traffic becomes more and more severe. Beside disturbing our lives, it can cause many problems to our physical and mental health. As people attach more and more importance to the protection of our environment, they will chose to purchase for other environmental-friendly vehicles instead of cars. Last but not least, the great amount of cars is a hard nut to crack for the government. The heavy traffic in rush hours everyday adds heavy burdens to the shoulder of the police. The construction of new roads and other relative facilities brings the government great financial pressure and dealing with the pollution caused by the car also cost a lot. Limiting the number of cars and introducing new vehicles can save a great deal of money for the government. Simply put, it is safely for we to draw the conclusion that there will be fewer cars in the future because of the development of transport system, the environmental pressure and the financial pressure of the government.

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Last but not least, the great amount number of cars is a hard nut to crack for the government (very nice sentence :)). The heavy traffic in rush hours The heavy rush hour traffic everyday adds heavy burdens to places a heavy burden on the shoulders of the police. The construction of new roads and other relative facilities infrastructure plus having to deal with the pollution problem puts great financial pressure on the government. brings the government great financial pressure and dealing with the pollution caused by the car also cost a lot. Limiting the number of cars and introducing new more environmentally friendly vehicles can save a great deal of money for the government.

Simply put, it is safely for we to we can safely draw the conclusion that there will be fewer cars in the future because of the development of a more advanced transport system, the environmental pressures and the financial pressure of on the government.

Another great article. Just a little feedback. The phrase "As far as I am concerned" is quite strong.This means that this is your view and that is as far as you are concerned about. So anything else, you don't care or are not concerned about. For example if my brother told me "hey! you didn't wash your plate yesterday". I can reply, "as far as I'm concerned, I washed it right after dinner yesterday". Then I walk away. So I don't want to listen to anything else he has to say. If you would like express your views but soften it a little, you can also say : In my view, In my opinion, In my personal opinion, I feel that, I think that, ...

I agree with you. Now we own cars but only drive it 10% of the time. 90% it is parked at home or at work. In 20 years, there will be driverless cars, so public transport will be much cheaper and very convenient. When that happens, it makes more sense to use public transport where cars will be better utilised 24 hours and we do not need that many cars idle in the car parks just so we can own a car.

Will there be fewer cars in the future？

Traditionally, people regard cars as an important part of their possession and many people tend to buy cars after (or as soon as) they get their driving license. However, the problem is that there is a question as to whether the number of cars will decrease in the following next twenty years? As far as I am concerned, there will be fewer cars in the next two decades with reasons as follows.

First, the advanced transport system in the future can enable people to travel freely without a car. My hometown witnessed a dramatically development in the public transportation in (or over) the last ten years. In the past, there were only a few buses in operation, but now we have 13 underground train lines of underground and much more buses. The booming of the bike-sharing industry has also brought citizens great convenience when they are out need to travel. If we want to travel in a long distance in a hurry, in the past, we have no choice(alternative) but to drive our cars in the past, while . Now, we can choose to go by air plane or high speed rail. In the future, the more and more developed transport system will make it less necessary of a requirement for people to buy cars.

Second, the increasingly environmental pressure will force people to devise new environmental-friendly vehicles to replace our present cars. The tremendous huge (or phenomenal) number of cars brings too much pollution to our earth. Although many manufacturers are providing electric onic cars, electricity is still produced by the burning of fossil fuel in most area parts of the world, which releases carbon dioxide (or carbon monoxide ?), along with many other toxic gases. In addition, noise pollution caused by the heavy traffic by this huge number of cars is becoming more and more severe. Besides disturbing disrupting our lives, it can cause many problems to our physical and mental health. As people attach more and more importance to the protection of our environment, they will chose to purchase for other more environmental-friendly vehicles instead of cars.

Italki does not allow me to post in one go so part 2 to follow soon.

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