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My Trip to Bhutan (23)
It's a This is the landscape townscape of Haa.
Actually, the Indian army are is stationed there. Haa is very close to the border between Bhutan and China. so Bhutan is protected by the Indian army. We have the image appearance of happiness in Bhutan but there are some problems. in Bhutan, for example, is being invaded by China.Some other suggestions:
This is the town of Haa in Bhutan.
Army is singular so the verb is singular (is).
Shorter sentences help the reader understand your thought.
Overall, the paragraph is well written! Keep practicing!
0 votedMay 8, 20191Cristian, this is a funny and well written story :-D .... Below are some corrections to improve your meaning.
Today's photo and a made up story
When I look at the photo, I can see many drunk people drunken with flares. Some people are wearing traditional clothesing. They are singing a beautiful song while they move their hand with holding flares.
They drank all the night, because it is the birthday of a famous person in this town. Each year, they meet in a pub in the center of the town and drink all the night to celebrate its his (or her) birthday.
Today is another day and probably they are handover hungover. Next year more and will be even better!0 votedOctober 8, 20181describing a photo
In this photo you can see a group of children who is are celebrating a party. On the left of the picture, there is a girl. Maybe, she is celebrating her birthday because she is receiving some gifts. s She is wearing a pink dress and a blue bracelet in her right hand. The children to the right of the picture is are holding some gifts and all of them is are looking at the girl. b Behind them, there is a large table with some food and drinks on it. It´s a sunny day and they are wearing light clothes so it might be summer. In the background, I can see colour paper decorations and some green trees.This a well written description. Leave a space after punctuation. Children is a plural word so the verb needs to be plural also.
Well done!
0 votedOctober 8, 20181- These phrases are a good attempt but neither one sounds natural in English. #1 is awkwardly phrased but can be understood. #2 is wrong several reasons. This phrase would be clear in English: "You have lost the chance to be friends with her because of the way you treated her." (or you could say "due to the way....) Keep practicing :-)0 votedOctober 8, 20181
Check it please
Hello Adam.
You asked me to tell you more about Kharkiv. Ok, sure! The most popular and quick transportation in the city is underground. If you want to do go shopping and spend leisure time, the underground-the best choise choice. It is also cheaper! and one of the cheeper! You asked me, "What about shopping (do you mean "where do I get groceries")?" Ok, let me explain s get it. The best way to buy cheep cheap food is in the local market called-"ATB". It is one of popular supermarkets in our city and you can find in in it around the whole city. What about clothes? If you want to buy some fashion and brand clothes you really must go to "Karavan" and "Dafy" at the mall. It is the biggest mall of in our city, where you can find what do you want.
I think it's all that you have need to know for the first time.
If you have more questions? Call or text me later.
Dear Cheers, Vanya (or Sincerely, Vanya or Bye for now, Vanya)This is well written. Remember to make a space after your punctuation!
0 votedOctober 4, 20180Please read my comments below the letter:
Letter for my English-speaking friend (for the exam)
I need to pass an English exam and one of the tasks is writing a letter. Please check my letter and correct any mistakes.
Dear Mary,
Thank you for your letter. I hope everything's okay. Let me answer your questions.
I was upset to hear that your quarreled with your friend. Unfortunately, even real friends quarrel. But that is not a reason to break up. Recently, I quarreled with my friend too. She didn't help me with my project, althrough although she promised to help. I was so upset, but then she came to me and ask me to forgive her. I was amazed. Usually I'm the first one to apologize when we quarrel. I always say that we all face problems in daily life, and it's important to deal with them quickly and effectively. Friendship is one of the main things in our life. That's why we should be together and support each other.
And I want to ask you some questions. How many close friends do you have? Where does your aunt live? Are you going to your aunt with family or friends? Write me again.
Best wishes,
AnnThis is very well written. It sounds authentic. If I was your professor, I would give you a good grade :-)
I have some suggestions for you. I have unlined some words in your letter, see the following for my comments:
Real friends - try "good friends" or "best friends"
But - The "but" that is underlined, this word is a conjunctive or a connector. Sentences should not start with a conjunctive. So you could say, "Unfortunately, even good friends quarrel but that is not a reason to break up." Or you can say, "Unfortunately, even good friends quarrel. This is not a good reason to break up." The way you have written this thought is okay. The examples I have given you are better grammar.
Be together - try "stay together"
Are you going to your aunt with family or friends? - What are you trying to ask? As the reader, I do not know what Mary said about her aunt. You can clarify by saying "Are you going to your aunt's house with your family or friends?" or "Are you going to visit your aunt with your family or friends?"
GOOD LUCK!
0 votedSeptember 30, 20181- You are correct about "lash out". It is the way you use a whip. You can "lash out" verbally or physically. Snap can have several meanings. A snap can be a fastener on your clothes. "The coat had snaps instead of buttons". To snap at some one, is to speak abruptly. "Her boss said, "Work faster!" "I am working faster!", she quickly snapped. Snap can also mean break or change abruptly. "The rope will snap from the weight of the load." You can say this about a person. "After years of being kind to her angry husband, the woman finally snapped and yelled back at him." I hope this helps :-)0 votedSeptember 30, 20181
Why do my dogs go crazy with chicken?
It''s time to eat. and These beauties (are going crazy because we are going to eat chicken.) each time we going to eat chicken, they go crazy, We can eat any meat, pork or anything else and they are calmed. but If we eat chicken, we know we are is going to have a barking concert.
You have done a good job of composing your thoughts. Remember to capitalize the first word of a sentence. Keep you sentences shorter, only one or two thoughts. Good Job!
0 votedSeptember 28, 20181This is very good. A few changes will make it better.
Journal 50 (yay!)
This is the fiftieth J journal I've written so far.
I reviewed my first journal and I realized I'm still not good at writing.
Learning second language is really tough. It's like a long journey.
There might some very little progresses I made. (This sentence is ok but hard to understand. Try is way instead "I might have made a little progress.")
I believe I am steadily getting better.Overall this is a good journal entry!
0 votedSeptember 27, 20181
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