My Trip to Bhutan (23)
It's a townscape of Haa.
Actually, Indian army are stationed there. Haa is very close to the border between Bhutan and China so Bhutan is protected by Indian army.
We have the image of happiness in Bhutan but there are some problems in Bhutan for example, being invaded by China.
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My Trip to Bhutan (23)
It's a This is the landscape townscape of Haa.Actually, the Indian army are is stationed there. Haa is very close to the border between Bhutan and China. so Bhutan is protected by the Indian army. We have the image appearance of happiness in Bhutan but there are some problems. in Bhutan, for example, is being invaded by China.
Some other suggestions:
This is the town of Haa in Bhutan.
Army is singular so the verb is singular (is).
Shorter sentences help the reader understand your thought.
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