Today's photo and a made up story
When I look at the photo, I can see many people drunken with flares. Some people wear traditional clothes. They sing a beautiful song while they move their hand with flares.
They drank all the night, because it is the birthday of a famous person in this town. Each year, they meet in a pub in the center of the town and drink all the night to celebrate its birthday.
Today is another day, and probably they are handover. Next year more and better!
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 7
0
Today's photo and a made up story
When I look at the this photo, I can see many people drunken in joy with twinklers in their hands. flares. Some people are wearing traditional clothing. They sing a beautifully song while as they move wave their twinklers to the tunehand with flares.They drank all the night, because it is to celebrate the birthday of a famous person in this their town. Each year, they meet in a pub located in the center of the town and drink all the night to celebrate its birthday.
Today is another anniversary day, and probably they are having a hangover the next day. Next year more and the celebrations will be better!
0
Cristian, this is a funny and well written story :-D .... Below are some corrections to improve your meaning.
Today's photo and a made up story
When I look at the photo, I can see many drunk people drunken with flares. Some people are wearing traditional clothesing. They are singing a beautiful song while they move their hand with holding flares.They drank all the night, because it is the birthday of a famous person in this town. Each year, they meet in a pub in the center of the town and drink all the night to celebrate its his (or her) birthday.
Today is another day and probably they are handover hungover. Next year more and will be even better!
0
Today's photo, and a made up story.
When I look at this photo, I can see many drunk people with fireworks. Some people are wearing traditional clothes.They sang a beautiful song while moving their hands.
They drank all the night, because it is the birthday of a famous person in this town. Each year, they meet in a pub in the center of the town and drink all the night to celebrate his/her/their birthday. "His if it is a man, her if it is a woman, their if you don't know."
Today is another day, and they are probably hungover. Next year more and better!
Make sure your tenses are consistent. If you are talking about events in the past, use the past tense. If you are talking about what you are seeing on the photo use the present tense.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
