First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i want to learn english! Who will help me? p

Please! help me to talk to listen and to write!

This is a very good first post. I hope the corrections are helpful. Gerry

The Spring ( in the title the article the is optional - you could just call the piece Spring)

We have It is April and in my counntry but it isn't still isn't very warm.

In English we use the verb to be rather than to have much more often than in other languages. Other examples of this type of error are -

I have 27 years. This should be -  I am 27 years old.

Fortunately we have the calendars tells us that spring arrived since on the 21st of March.

The trees arent still aren't green but we no longer have temperature belo minuses degrees ;o). The sun shines and the warm wind blows. You can see the first flowers in the allotments in front of the hauses houses. Those The flowers are white snowdrops and violet, oranges and yellow crocuses. I'm looking forward so much for to the green leaves and bloomying trees ;o). My mood will be very good when I will walk between in so such wonderful fresh nature countryside;o) Ow and we are I am looking forward to the arrival of the first white stork ;o) and we hope to hearing the  staggering singing of the lark ;o)

I know there are a lot of corrections here but , as I said in my comment, take what you want and leave what you don't.

Gerry :-)

Transformer 3

I watched <em>Transformer 3</em> two days ago. I think that movie is just ok average. It is was not as good as I had expected. I guess think that the director is trying to tell a story, but maybe because my english is not that good I am not interested at all in this. What I want is to see fightings between is the robots fighting. I don't even know the name of robots. This is not important however as I only want to see them fighting. If I cared about  the story of one the movie, I would choose another a different one. All I want to see are the fantastic picture effects and feel enjoy the high technology introduced in such a movie.

To be honest the leading actress sucks has little to offer. she has got nothing except a sexy body.

I hope this helps.

Gerry :-)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello! My name is _____. I come from northern a city of in northern China.I had Learned english a long time ago when I was a student.Now,that I have a lot of spare time I want to learn it again bBeacause I like english. As an international languageit is more very (or most )important.

I hope this helps.

Gerry :-)