Everyone can fly.
Everyone can fly.
As long as you are willing to work hard waving their wings.
When you fly to the sky,the wind will blow branch cheers for you and the sun through the clouds to illuminate the road ahead for you.
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iI really don't like doing actual corrections - I prefer to just encourage people to keep trying to write - but if it helps here are a couple of suggested corrections.
Everyone can fly.
Everyone can fly.
As long as you are willing to work hard waving their wings.
Two possibilities here:
As long as you are willing to work hard waving* your wings
As long as they are willing to work hard waving* their wings
*flapping is possibly better verb to use rather than waving
When you fly to in or even better through the sky the wind will blow, branches cheers for you on and the sun through the clouds to illuminates the road ahead for of you.
Just some suggestions, no more than that.
Cheers
Gerry
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Hi Yu-Ting
This is very poetic. I like it very much as it has a great sense of freedom in its ideas.
I agree with Simone also; our thoughts - or spritiual side if you like - can soar to great heights at times. Best of luck with your lessons and courses.
Gerry :-)
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We can to fly in thought and we can to fly in spirit... All person spiritual is light and live more in sky that on earth. But this people are firms.
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