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Poland flagMona Lisa
the spring We have April and in my counntry isn't still very warm. Fortunately we have calendars spring since 21th of March. Trees arent still green but we do not have minuses degrees ;o). The sun shines and the warm wind blow. You can see first flowers in allotment in front of hauses. Those flowers are white snowdrops and violet, oranges and yellow crocus. I'm waiting so much for green leaves and bloomy trees ;o). My mood will be very good when I will walk between so wonderful fresh nature ;o) Ow and we are looking for first white stork ;o) and we hope to hear staggering sing of the lark ;o)

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The Spring ( in the title the article the is optional - you could just call the piece Spring)

We have It is April and in my counntry but it isn't still isn't very warm.

In English we use the verb to be rather than to have much more often than in other languages. Other examples of this type of error are -

I have 27 years. This should be -  I am 27 years old.

Fortunately we have the calendars tells us that spring arrived since on the 21st of March.

The trees arent still aren't green but we no longer have temperature belo minuses degrees ;o). The sun shines and the warm wind blows. You can see the first flowers in the allotments in front of the hauses houses. Those The flowers are white snowdrops and violet, oranges and yellow crocuses. I'm looking forward so much for to the green leaves and bloomying trees ;o). My mood will be very good when I will walk between in so such wonderful fresh nature countryside;o) Ow and we are I am looking forward to the arrival of the first white stork ;o) and we hope to hearing the  staggering singing of the lark ;o)

I know there are a lot of corrections here but , as I said in my comment, take what you want and leave what you don't.

Gerry :-)

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Hi Mona Lisa This is a very interesting entry. The subject matter - the arrival of Spring - is one that has universal appeal. I have added a correction as well. Please take these corrections as suggestions only. Take what you want and ignore the rest. Gerry
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hahaha for the summer I have to wait three months, such long time ;o)
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I am waiting for the steps of summer....Sring is passing...

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