In my opinion, your Master's programme is preparing prepares [present simple] excellently for that. I had occasion talking was able to talk with some formers students and teachers from your Master's course during an open house day, consolidating my desire joining to join you. Also, the fact of giving us providing opportunities practising to practise three languages is, for me, a great element. Thereby, I will can be able to continue practising English, Spanish and Italian. Otherwise Additionally, the small number of students per class is very attractive and this customized relationship and this particularity particularly allows for acquiring easily knowledges [it would be better to say a more personal learning environment]. Finally, your Master's is would be [imagining] the continuity of my curriculum interest in political science, hoping the culmination.  [better: allowing me to further develop my interest in this area].

To prepare that for this, I have decided giving given [use present perfect here] me myself maximum of several opportunities and chances [tautology] for future with studing of internationales theories courses for having knowledges to study international theories, in order to improve my knowledge in this area [do you mean that you have already studied these courses? It's a bit unclear]. Thoses These courses were occasion an opportunityto apprehend learn about international relationships and to understand these this one subject. Also with this perspective, I have restarted this year practising Spanish [always use capital letters for languages, nationalities and countries in English]  with  at university. The level I'm currently practising at was is B2, according to the European Framework of Languages. Plus, I have begun learning Italian with an association in my city. The aim is talking to speak several languages - an essentially [use the adjective, not the adverb] thing if I want exchanging to exchange and working at an international grade.

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"Dear Sir/Madam, 

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Please check my English!!

One reason is that globalization will accelerate faster and faster in the near future. These days more and more foreign people visit are visiting [it is better to use present continuous here as this is an ongoing occurrence] Japan and a lot of Japanese people are traveling [present continuous] in all over the world.

Another reason is that there is no bad point are no negatives to being able to speak two languages. If you can speak two languages, you are able to touch two cultures [plural] without relying on interpretation by from other people.

Therefore, Japanese people should learn other languages to catch up with the trend of time.

Own comment:

I’m one of those [people sounds more natural], no matter what the situation, whose love for music [is - 'remains' is emphasising something true in the past is still true now] strong [use the adjective, not adverb] in public spaces; but [too formal; try there's definitely a time and a place]. Besides, not the whole world is attached to particular types of music. Not long ago,  [too formal; try people still thought it was cool to listen to lame ringtones on their mobiles]. God! How creepy was it to hear them ringing all the time on the middle of a silent room, especially if your tone had banda or a Mexican corrido on it! Bizarrely enough, some phone companies still keep this feature with the [a little formal; try an extra] monthly payment for its use. For real! Music in public places should have boundaries rather than be banned.

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