Please Check My English! (1) 

One reason is that the pace of globalization will accelerate (2) faster and faster in near future. These days, (3) more and more foreign people visit Japan and a lot of Japanese (4) people travel all over the world.

Another reason is that there is no bad point definitely an advantage for being able to speak two languages. (5) If you can speak two languages, you are (5) will be able to touch two culture interact with another culture without any need for translation. by other people.

Therefore, Japanese people should learn other languages to (6) keep up with the times. catch up with the trend of time.

Hi Sakata, 

I would like to provide some suggestions for your writing: 

(1) There are a few different styles for capitalising titles. We capitalise the first letter of each word, with some exceptions such as prepositions and articles. 

(2) There are some redundant words here as "accelerate" already means that a process is speeding up. The use of extra and unnecessary words to express a meaning is known as pleonasm and makes our writing less concise. Other examples: I am going back home. / Again, he is giving another lecture too. or He is giving another lecture again.

(3) We use a comma (,) to separate an introductory phrase from the rest of a sentence. An introductory phrase connects an idea of a preceding sentence with the current one. Another example: Obesity is on the rise. These days, obesity-related diseases are very prevalent. 

(4) The word "Japanese" already means citizens of Japan. Therefore, "people" is not necessary. 

(5) We are writing a conditional sentence here to express something likely in the future. This is known as the first conditional sentence. There are different ways of writing such a sentence, and one common way is: If ..... (verb-simple present tense), ..... will + verb-simple present tense). Example: If you learn two languages, you will understand another culture.

(6) This phrase means to update one's behavior or beliefs to reflect what is current. I used this phrase as I believe it expresses your meaning more accurately.

I hope these help.

I think bilingual education should be continued in Japan.

One reason is that globalization will accelerate faster and faster in the near future. These days more and more foreign people visit Japan and a lot of Japanese people travel in all over the world.

Another reason is that there is no bad point an advantage to being able to speak two languages. If you can speak two languages, you are able to experience two cultures without interpretation by other people.

Therefore, Japanese people should learn other languages to catch up with the trend of time.

Please check my English!!

One reason is that globalization will accelerate faster and faster in the near future. These days more and more foreign people visit Japan and a lot of Japanese people travel in all over the world.

Another reason is that there is nothing wrong with no bad point being able to speak two languages. If you can speak two languages, you are able to touch two cultures on your own  (without interpretation by other people)

Therefore, Japanese people should learn other languages to catch up with the trend of time.

Please check my English!!

One reason is that globalization will accelerate faster and faster in the near future. These days more and more foreign people visit are visiting [it is better to use present continuous here as this is an ongoing occurrence] Japan and a lot of Japanese people are traveling [present continuous] in all over the world.

Another reason is that there is no bad point are no negatives to being able to speak two languages. If you can speak two languages, you are able to touch two cultures [plural] without relying on interpretation by from other people.

Therefore, Japanese people should learn other languages to catch up with the trend of time.

I think bilingual education should be continued in Japan.

One of the reasons is that globalization will accelerate faster and faster in the near future. Nowadays, more and more foreign people visit Japan and a lot of Japanese people travel to all over the world.

Another reason is that there is no bad side to being able to speak two languages. If you can speak two languages, you are able to explore different cultures without interpretation by other people.

Therefore, Japanese people should learn other languages to catch up with the trend of time.