对不对？？？？

树上有该子们収苹果。
桌上有水果和书。
雨林里有长颈鹿。
海洋里有一条大鱼，一条不大不小的鱼，一条小鱼。
钱包里有很多钱和储蓄卡。
桌子上有各种各样的玩具。

（There is no such a word of “中鱼”.）

Qingming Festival

Qingming Festival is a traditional festival when people visit and sweep the tombs of their ancestors, families, friends, or anyone that they care about. It's always at the beginning of April, which seems to be a coincidence that those days rains often. When it rains, the atmosphere becomes more sorrowful. (书面文章不能用缩写)

Yesterday my mom told me my dad went to his best friend's grave alone.（told 后面一般不用that） His best friend passed away a few years ago. He was a little older than my dad, but they always had a lot of things to talk about. I remembered him, a joyful person with a good sense of humor, and he always looked carefree. My family loved him, and he was really helpful. The last time I saw him was when he drove me to another city to study when my parents had no time to do that. I never thought it would be the last time we met. He died from a sudden heart attack, but he looked pretty healthy in the past.

It was very sudden. I couldn't imagine my dad's feeling when he heard that.(news 主要是新闻的意思) I feel sorry for my dad, especially when I learned that he drove a long way to his friend's grave by himself, which also made me feel sad for my dad. Death always comes inadvertently,(always 程度太深，这句话可能不适用) what we should do is to cherish every moment with the ones that we love. I guess that's what Qingming Festival is meant for.

today

Today is a windy Thursday. I don't know when the windy weather will be over. Last night I practiced the guitar, but I'm always not a hardworking  person, and I just practiced for about twenty minutes. I think that I cannot improve by working harder. (不太明白你原句的意思). I have been not reviewing Korean for a few days, so I feel disappointed to myself. That's all.

(永远不要用and开始一句话)

电子书或者纸书

电子书或者纸书
我常常用电子书。虽然体验不是那么好，但是电子书有很多好处。首先重量比较轻，因此在地铁去上班或者假期的时候带电子书更舒服。 我可以很容易在旅行包带一千本书。其次我们可以很方便地买电子书，不用去书店，不用等。尤其是外国难找到的书，买纸书需要等几个星期才能收到。除此以外因为电子书不用纸，所以帮助保护地球的森林。
然而对于很多人来说买电子书比较难。另外因为有的书没有电子书，所以需要买纸书。
总结就是虽然在家里我最喜欢看纸书， 但是电子书有优点。
I would have liked to say ‘version’ eg– the electronic version. I'm not sure if 纸书 is the correct translation of ebook.

“纸书” means real printed books.

I often read eBooks. Although the experience isn’t so good, eBook have a lot of advantages. First the weight is relatively light. Therefore on the metro or on holidays to carry an eBook is more comfortable. It’s easy on holidays to bring a thousand books in your backpack. Also buying books is fast. You don’t need to go to a bookshop, you don’t need to wait. Especially for difficult to find foreign books. Otherwise you need to wait a few weeks to receive the book.
Apart from this because eBooks don’t use paper materials they help to protect the environment.
However for some people buying eBooks is a complicated process. Also some books are not available as eBooks so you have to buy the paper book.
In conclusion although I like to read paper books at home, eBooks have a lot of good points.