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Qingming Festival Qingming Festival is a traditional festival when people will visit and sweep the tombs of ancestors, families, friends, and anyone that people care about. It's always at the beginning of April, which seems to be a coincidence that those days rains often. When it's raining, the atmosphere becomes more sorrowful. Yesterday my mom told me that my dad went to his best friend's grave alone. His best friend passed away a few years ago. He was a little older than my dad, but they always had a lot to talk about. I remembered him, he was a joyful person, had a good sense of humor, and always looked carefree. My family loved him, and he was really helpful. The last time I saw him, was when he drove me to another city to study when my parents had no time. I never thought it would be the last time we met. He died of a sudden heart attack, but he looked pretty healthy in the past. It was very sudden. I couldn't imagine my dad's feeling when he heard about the news. I feel sorry for my dad, especially learning that he drove a long way to his friend's grave by himself, which made me kind of sad for my dad. Death always comes inadvertently, what we should do is to cherish every moment with the ones we love. I guess that's one thing that the Qingming Festival really wants to teach us.

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Qingming Festival

Qingming Festival is a traditional festival when people visit and sweep the tombs of their ancestors, families, friends, or anyone that they care about. It's always at the beginning of April, which seems to be a coincidence that those days rains often. When it rains, the atmosphere becomes more sorrowful. (书面文章不能用缩写)

Yesterday my mom told me my dad went to his best friend's grave alone.(told 后面一般不用that) His best friend passed away a few years ago. He was a little older than my dad, but they always had a lot of things to talk about. I remembered him, a joyful person with a good sense of humor, and he always looked carefree. My family loved him, and he was really helpful. The last time I saw him was when he drove me to another city to study when my parents had no time to do that. I never thought it would be the last time we met. He died from a sudden heart attack, but he looked pretty healthy in the past.

It was very sudden. I couldn't imagine my dad's feeling when he heard that.(news 主要是新闻的意思) I feel sorry for my dad, especially when I learned that he drove a long way to his friend's grave by himself, which also made me feel sad for my dad. Death always comes inadvertently,(always 程度太深,这句话可能不适用) what we should do is to cherish every moment with the ones that we love. I guess that's what Qingming Festival is meant for.

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