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Hi, pleased to meet you. I'm a 16 year old girl who likes to learn languages, playing tennis and studying chemistry.
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    Climate change is an unsurmountable challenge. It indeed has serious impact in our lives. With time passing by, the environmental disruption has already effected us all. The need to reduce our carbon footprint has been urgent. There is no straightforward way to clean the air,but each and every one of us could cut down on driving cars,stop smoking and engage in planting during leisure time. If you can do your bit by reducing the usage of fossil fuels,I am sure,we can make a drastic change in the long run. Sincerely thanks for your time. Have a nice day.
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    February 9, 2023
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    I get along with my family. My father is friendly, but sometimes he is lazy. My brother is funny. We always laugh with each other. My mother is the most gentle in my family. My grandmother lives the farthest from me.
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    February 7, 2023
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    I get along with my family. My father is friendly but sometimes he is lazy. My brother is funny. We always laugh with each other. My mother is the gentlest** in my family. My grandmother lives the farthest from me. **My mother is the most gentle in my family.
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    February 7, 2023
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    hello everybody

    Hi， It's my first day here using this amazing <s>APP</s> app to talk to you. I really hope I can learn more mainly <s>in</s> about spoken English.
    A better sentence would be " I really hope I can learn more how to speak better in English".


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    January 27, 2020
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    Dong Hyuk's Diary - 003

    Today is the third day<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">s</s> <s>to</s> of writing a diary.
    The sentence is short but I think it will be good to write a diary everday.
    It will be my habit.
    But it is diffifult.


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    January 23, 2020
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    Dong hyuk's Diary - 002

    Today, I <s>tought</s> taught electricity to a new employee.
    I hope it will help <s>them</s> him/her.

    I wanna write my diary everyday.

    Employee is singular so don't use "them" as it refers to more than one person.
    Well done!
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    January 22, 2020
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    Please correct my English sentence!

    I disagree with the statement that the government should provide more support for unemployed people, and I have two reasons.
    First, most of them do not have motivation to work. If the government motivates them to work, i<s>t has</s> is the possibility that they need a lot of days to change their mind. I think some of them have motivation to work, but it is not necessary for them to provide more support.
    Second, it will cost tremendous money. I'm sure it will raise taxes, and many companies will have to lay off employees more. So, I think it will cause <s>a worse</s> the situation to be worse.
    For these reasons, I believe that the government should consider another way to change the recent situation.

    Good job!
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    January 22, 2020
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    Dong hyuk's Diary - 001

    This is the first day of practicing <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">of</s> english writing.

    I don't know if it is correct or not.

    If someone<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">'s</s> is reading my diary and correcting my sentences, I am really happy.

    Anyway, this is the first day of writing a diary in english.


    Well done, it's really good!!
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    January 21, 2020
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    Give me a correction please

    What do you eat for lunch, when you are at work? This problem is literally troubling many people very much*, I am sure. Short noon break, tiredness from morning even the work that will have to be done <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">at</s> in the afternoon all make people not be able to have a meal as comfortably as they want. Today's topic is about that, more specifically, I am going to write about "food truck".

    First, it's really an economy way to start a business, compared with the high cost for opening a restaurant in United States as much as hundreds of thousands of dollars, which is only cost thirty thousand. On the other hand, the menu they offer also really make it have the power with which they could compete with traditional restaurant, Such as Mediterranean offers, halal hotdog and so on. Raletively lower price, various choices offered even change everyday, those are all the reasons why food truck are as popular nowadays.

    In addition, <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">the more one</s> another advantage of food truck is mobility, sometimes the location you are equals the profits you will earn. Before that, you should get your license through the city's Consumer and Regulatory Affairs Department and then pass the health inspection. The reinspection will follow for every six months. when you take up a job, you should really be accountable for your work. Remenber only by the honesty can people have a place in society.

    * Very much is good but " a lot" fits more in this case

    Well done!!
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    January 20, 2020
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    I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

    JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Feb.25th

    Yesterday we went to the cafe to see <strike style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">where there are were</strike> lots of mameshibas. <strike>yesterday</strike> <strike>to see them. </strike>Mameshiba is a typical Japanese dog <strike>in Japan</strike> and Japanese people <strike>especially</strike> love them as pets. You might understand that kind of dog well, when I say like the dog similar to shibaken. Mameshiba is a kind of dog smaller than shibaken, Mame parts of name, mameshiba, means "smaller", so mameshiba is smaller than shibaken, just so you know. There <strike>are</strike> were people from abroad countries in the cafe, and they were <strike>enjoyed</strike> enjoying touching lots of mameshibas. Indeed, they were totally adorable and they make me so comfortable. My tiredness from work everyday had gone away since touching them. I want to go to that cafe if possible, but this thing worth it because we go there sometimes, maybe if we would go there everyday and touch them again and again, it could be normal thing. Anyway, I am thinking the cafe where there are lots of dogs is really a nice idea, and for people from abroad this thing is really interesting.

    Well done for your effort! Above there are some small mistakes which you did. Some things for you to keep in mind are that when you are talking about an event which you did yesterday use the past not the present (use were instead of are for example. This kind of past is known as past simple). Also people from abroad are called foreigners. Overall it was good!!
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    February 25, 2019
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