I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Feb.25th

Yesterday we went to the cafe to see where there are were lots of mameshibas. yesterday to see them. Mameshiba is a typical Japanese dog in Japan and Japanese people especially love them as pets. You might understand that kind of dog well, when I say like the dog similar to shibaken. Mameshiba is a kind of dog smaller than shibaken, Mame parts of name, mameshiba, means "smaller", so mameshiba is smaller than shibaken, just so you know. There are were people from abroad countries in the cafe, and they were enjoyed enjoying touching lots of mameshibas. Indeed, they were totally adorable and they make me so comfortable. My tiredness from work everyday had gone away since touching them. I want to go to that cafe if possible, but this thing worth it because we go there sometimes, maybe if we would go there everyday and touch them again and again, it could be normal thing. Anyway, I am thinking the cafe where there are lots of dogs is really a nice idea, and for people from abroad this thing is really interesting.

Well done for your effort! Above there are some small mistakes which you did. Some things for you to keep in mind are that when you are talking about an event which you did yesterday use the past not the present (use were instead of are for example. This kind of past is known as past simple). Also people from abroad are called foreigners. Overall it was good!!

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Feb.25th

I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Feb.25th

We went to a cafe to watch lots of mameshibas yesterday. Mameshibas are typical kind of dogs in Japan and Japanese especially love them as pets . You might know that kind of dog well. Mameshiba is similar to shibaken but smaller. “Mame” part of the name means "smaller", so mameshiba means smaller than shibaken. There are people from foreign countries in the cafe, and they were enjoying  touching lots of mameshibas. Indeed, they were totally adorable and they make me so comfortable. My tiredness from work everyday goes away when  touching them. I want to go to that cafe regularly and that’s worth it because we go there sometimes. maybe if we would go there everyday and touch them again and again, it could be a normal thing. Anyway, I am thinking about the cafe with lots of dogs is a really nice idea, and for people from abroad this thing is really interesting.