Dong hyuk's Diary - 001
This is the first day of practice of english writing.
I don't know if it is correct or not.
If someone's reading my diary and correct my sentence, I really happy.
Anyway, this is the first day of writing diary in english.
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Dong hyuk's Diary - 001
This is the first day of practicing of english writing.
I don't know if it is correct or not.
If someone's is reading my diary and correcting my sentences, I am really happy.
Anyway, this is the first day of writing a diary in english.
Well done, it's really good!!
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Mystery Girl's corrections are fine except English should always be capitalized. All languages start with upper case in English.
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