工作

我找了一个海外的工作在外国。我跟我的朋友一起去在來这里准备要。我们全夏天工作整个夏天。我们一起讨论交流了和选择了工作。我在合同上读取了许多讯息。这份工作有很多责任。 我的关键主要任务包括跟人周旋，我应该是需要合群和保持恭敬的态度，我也应该准时上班按时去工作。我在合同读了这个消息。我的公司会给我安排住处。

practicing words

1. veganism
She is a YouTuber. She always makes a healthy lifestyle videos to her fans.

2. demonetize
He already retired for one year ago so securities will demonetize him into the company.

Demonetized is used for currencies, not on a person.

Some European currencies were demonetized after Euro was introduced.


3. critical condition
Due to a traffic-related accident (car accident), she is a in critical condition in the emergency room person now.

Please check the grammar and give some advice to me, thank you :)

My Job

Currently I'm a Packaging Engineer at Johnson & Johnson Company

I'm responsible for the followings:

Ensure Maintain the database of specifications.
Lead the packaging project.
Looking for new project savings.
Make sure Monitor the trial line.
Update or create procedures and specificacions in the Tru system.
Create new artworks.

请你纠正我的例句 2018.4.3

谢谢你！

图标平时通常有两个坐标轴。
这件事情个物件的形状很怪，好像有变形。(Did you mean to say "This object"??)

My view on attending colloge at abroad

With the development of China , people's life quality of life enhance a lot/dramatically much more which makes greatly attract Chinese people's attract great attention to the importance to of education . Therefore , an increasing number of Chinese youngers choose to study abroad . I am convinced that attending college at abroad is good for us .
There is no denying that attending college at abroad has many merits .On the one hand , you can expand your horizon (of ??) when you studying abroad . On the other hand ,you can feel experience different kinds of cultures and environmental surrounding ,and make foreign friends . so that you can in order to master a foreign language easily . What is more , you will become an independent person. While you leave your hometown and family ,you must learn how to deal with all kinds of problems in your daily life (by yourself) .I konw that not everyone has the chance to study abroad. But if you do, have it that you must grab it. be try .I believe you will find (discover) a new world .

Introducing my friend

Let me introduce one of my close friends. His name is Jay Park, and he is a doctor whose major is internal medicine. He is an alumnus of my alma mater. We graduted from the same school, but we received training at different hospitals. I used to hang out with him often when we were medical students. After graduating from the school, he and I were far apart from each other, so we haven't didn't get together as much often as we used to be had done. I like meeting up with him. He has a nice character and is considerate. He's a father of two babies. I know he is very busy bringing up his children after (he finish his) work. I hope we could meet up (hang out together) more often and have a great time.