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Alison
practicing words 1. veganism She is a YouTuber. She always makes a healthy lifestyle video to her fans. 2. demonetize He already retired for one year ago so securities will demonetize him into the company. 3. critical condition Due to traffic accident, she is a critical condition person now. Please check the grammar and give some advice to me, thank you :)

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practicing words

1. veganism
She is a vegan and a YouTuber. She always makes a healthy lifestyle videos to for her fans.  A sentence using veganism could read like this, "Veganism is a lifestyle choice that involves eating only foods made from plants."

2. demonetize
He already retired for one year ago (you could also say "He has been retired for one year...")so securities will demonetize him into the company.  I don't understand what you are trying to say in the second half of this sentence.  Generally, to demonetize is to declare legal tender (i.e. a government's currency) as worthless.  So, a sentence using the word demonetize could read like this, "The government went bankrupt, so their currency was demonetized."

3. critical condition
Due to traffic accident, she is a in critical condition person now.

Please check the grammar and give some advice to me, thank you :)

Good job, Alison! Keep at it!  I hope my corrections helped.

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practicing words

1. veganism
She is a YouTuber. She always makes a healthy lifestyle videos to her fans.

2. demonetize
He already retired for one year ago so securities will demonetize him into the company.

Demonetized is used for currencies, not on a person.

Some European currencies were demonetized after Euro was introduced.


3. critical condition
Due to a traffic-related accident (car accident), she is a in critical condition in the emergency room person now.

Please check the grammar and give some advice to me, thank you :)

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