My view on attending colloge at abroad

With the development of China , people's life quality of life enhance a lot/dramatically much more which makes greatly attract Chinese people's attract great attention to the importance to of education . Therefore , an increasing number of Chinese youngers choose to study abroad . I am convinced that attending college at abroad is good for us .
There is no denying that attending college at abroad has many merits .On the one hand , you can expand your horizon (of ??) when you studying abroad . On the other hand ,you can feel experience different kinds of cultures and environmental surrounding ,and make foreign friends . so that you can in order to master a foreign language easily . What is more , you will become an independent person. While you leave your hometown and family ,you must learn how to deal with all kinds of problems in your daily life (by yourself) .I konw that not everyone has the chance to study abroad. But if you do, have it that you must grab it. be try .I believe you will find (discover) a new world .

My view on attending college at abroad

With the development of China, people's quality of life is enhancing a lot/as well, which makes Chinese people attract give greater importance to education. Therefore, an increasing number of Chinese young adults choose to study abroad. I am convinced that attending college at abroad is good for us.
There is no denying that attending college at abroad has many merits. On the one hand, you can expand your horizon when you studying abroad. On the other hand, you can feel different kinds of cultural surroundings, and make foreign friends. This way you can master a foreign language easily. What is mor , you will become an independent person - while you leave your hometown and family, you must learn how to deal with all kinds of problems in your daily life. I know that not everyone has the chance to study abroad, but if you have it then you must be try it. I believe you will find a new world.

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