Writing practice #2 - about working time selection
Hello, here is writing practice (for test)
I really appreciate if you correct my wrong parts.
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Q) Manager make a schedule.
Option A: Monday, Wednesday, Friday
Option B: Tuesday, Thursday, Saturday
I thank you to ask me my opinion about working schedule before you decide. If given the choice, I would like to prefer working ‘Monday, Wednesday and Friday’ to ‘Tuesday, Thursday and Saturday’. There are following reasons why I have this schedule.
For one thing, I have two children who currently attend elementary school, therefore my wife works every weekend. I have no one to take care them during Saturday. It can be really hard to work weekends when I have family responsibilities. It would be great assistance to me if I were able to keep this.
For another thing, since it, I have had new projects with an outsourcing company on the table now. These projects do not allow me work on Saturday because of a regular meeting on Mondays. As you already know, this time is fixed also it is not changeable.
So for the reasons I outlined, I feel ‘Monday, Wednesday and Friday’ is better choice.