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You live near a park. Recently, some students from a local college have been spending time in the park in the evenings and at night. They talk loudly, play noisy games, and listen to loud music.
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Dear Sir or Madam
I live at 8 Rean Drive in North York, Ontario. My home is just across the street from the Rean Park.
I am writing this email to complain about noise of the park. Since last month, some students from a local college have been hanging out in the park from approximately 8pm to late at night. The student play music loudly and sometimes they even play a game such as soccer and basketball. This is not only weekend, but especially at weekend. This is huge impact on my life because the noise disturb my sleep. I think it is not only my case but also other people living around the park.
I would like to suggest that the park will be lock after midnight so that nobody can hang out there. My second option is that if you can send someone to be patrolled during dark, I am sure that noise ca be prevent.
I firmly believe that other people living on my street would feel happier if you can listen one of my suggestions.
Regards,
Sean Yi
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I live at 8 Rean Drive in North York, Ontario. My home is just across the street from the Rean Park.
I am writing this email to complain about the noise coming from the park. Since last month, some students from a local college have been hanging out in the park from approximately 8pm till very late. The students play music loudly and sometimes they even play a games such as soccer and basketball. This occasionally occurs during the weekdays but especially happens on the weekends. This has had a huge impact on my life because the noise disturbs my sleep. I think this is not the case just for me but also for other people living around the park.
I would like to suggest that the park be locked after midnight so that nobody can hang out there. My second suggestion is that if you can send someone should be sent to be patrolled * when it is dark. I am sure that noise can be prevented.
I firmly believe that other people living on my street would feel happier if you can listen to ** one of my suggestions.
Regards,
Sean Yi
Tips:
* 'to be + past participle' means that the subject/object has that action done onto them.
E.g. someone to be punished = 벌을 받아야 될 사람, someone to punish = 벌을 주는 사람
** you must always write to between 'listen' and the 'object you are listening'
e.g. listen carefully (carefully is an adverb), listen to me (me is the object), listen to this CD (this CD is the object)
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