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email writing practice - request about changing a time Hello, here is my email format writing practice (for test) I really appreciate if you correct my wrong parts. ---------------------- Dear professor, Hello, I am S. Y. who is a student in your course ‘Jazz studies program’ this semester. I am writing this letter to kindly request you to change in final exam time. The original time is next Monday at 10 am, and I would like to move this time to the same time as our night class. As you know, most students in this course have full time job, not to mention many of them will be unable to take off their jobs. Moreover, some students have children as well. For instance, my friend as Jane has two children who currently attend elementary school and no one to take them to school in the mornings except for her. I have discussed my situation with the student centre and have been instructed by them to follow through with this request. I would be happy to meet you if we have to discuss any alternative solutions or you may suggest. Sincerely, S. Y.

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Hi Sean,
Do not use Jeet's corrections - they are all wrong (sorry Jeet).
I am a native English speaker - mine is correct.
thanks!

Dear professor,

Hello, I am my name is S. Y. who is and I am a student in your course ‘Jazz studies program’ this semester. I am writing this letter to kindly request that you to change in the final exam time. The original time is next Monday at 10 am, and I would like to move this time to the same time as our night class.

As you know, most students in this course have full time jobs, not to mention so many of them will be unable to take off time from their jobs. Moreover, some students have children as well. For instance, my friend as Jane has two children who currently attend elementary school and she has no one to take them to school in the mornings except for her.

I have discussed my situation with the student centre and have been instructed by them to follow through with this request.

I would be happy to meet you if we have to discuss any alternative solutions or that you may suggest.

Sincerely,

S. Y.
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No need to follow wrong
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Good job

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