Formal letter - please help me to imporve my writing skills

Dear Sir,
I am writing in regards to some an incident which has recently taken place on the Internet. Some sensitive information concerning our company has been revealed. For this reason, I would like to request to any measures have been be taken to remove this information from the  your website.
This information includes very important data concerning our company. Revealing this information may have a negative influence     impact on the security of the highly qualified staff from  in our factory. It can could contribute to many dangerous situations as in regards to our activities in the other countries. Furthermore, a the reputation of our director can could be diminished.
Your positive attitude  attention to this situation could give us some benefits regarding financial support from the government. Please, take into account checking of  review your website program to help us to deal with this problem.
I looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully.

Great question! "Alright" is synonymous with "Okay." "The soup was alright" (Meaning it was okay). Or "Do you want to go out?" "Alright!" (Meaning, sure! Or Okay!) It can mean affirmative or qualitative. "All right" means pretty much the same thing, and technically, I guess, is the formal version. However, in actual usage, "all right" is more like a state of being, if I were to describe it...and I don't know that I'm describing it well. Maybe others can add their two cents. Like "How's your mother?" "She's all right, thanks for asking!" (kinda like "all good") or something like that. Does that help or have I muddled it further? Donna

They are used interchangeably, but "myself" is actually proper in that sentence. However, on the streets, in the US specifically, "me" would be more commonly used. In general, I'd used "myself" where possible. Like my daughter says about dressing up for a party...it's never bad manners to be too dressed up, but you don't want to be the person that is not dressed up enough. :) Hope that helps. Donna

Please correct my essay and revise my phrases to better ones.

Apartment buildings can be built to be several floors, and on every floor, several apartments can be constructed. So, they probably are could be capable of allowing more than a hundred families in them. And another way by which we can ensure that nature to remains untouched, is to try to develope each city of a country so that a great crowd of people will not be forced to go to the big cities for the great job opportunities they offer. This way, every city can have a balanced population, and authorities will be able not to touch the countryside.

Tnx in advance for correcting it.

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Hi, My name is Maxim. I began  have begun to study the English language. My profession is programming. I also study this profession!
I will be try write here everyday about my progress. If you occasionally read my text, don`t panic!
Today I installed virtualbox. This program makes virtual Windows. I am preparing for the Olympics in my College.
That`s all. Thank Google translate. Tomorrow will be a hard day. Good bye!

Awesome! I'll add you tonight when I get home from work! :)