Please correct my essay and revise my phrases to better ones.
Apartment buildings can be built on several floors and on every floor several apartments can be constructed. So they probably are capable of allowing more than a hundred families in them. And another way by which we can ensure the nature to remain untouched, is to try to develope each city of a country so that a great crowd of people will not be forced to go to the big cities for the great job opportunities they offer. This way every city can have a balanced population and authorities will be able not to touch the countryside.
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Please correct my essay and revise my phrases to better ones.
Apartment buildings can be built to be several floors, and on every floor, several apartments can be constructed. So, they probably are could be capable of allowing more than a hundred families in them. And another way by which we can ensure that nature to remains untouched, is to try to develope each city of a country so that a great crowd of people will not be forced to go to the big cities for the great job opportunities they offer. This way, every city can have a balanced population, and authorities will be able not to touch the countryside.Tnx in advance for correcting it.
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Apartment buildings can be built on several floors high and on every floor several apartments can be constructed. So Therefore they are probably are capable of allowing more than a hundred families in them. And Another way by which we can ensure the nature to remains untouched is to by trying to develop each city of a country so that a great crowds of people will not be forced to go to the big larger cities for the great better job opportunities. they offer. This way every city can have a balanced population and authorities will be able not not need to touch the countryside.
Tnx in advance for correcting it.
Interesting topic! I would suggest adding a topic sentence at the beginning of the paragraph to help tie the topics together. :)
Tnx in advance for correcting it.
Interesting topic! I would suggest adding a topic sentence at the beginning of the paragraph to help tie the topics together. :)
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