Formal letter - please help me to imporve my writing skills
Dear Sir,
I am writing in regard to some incident which has recently taken place on the Internet. Some sensitive information concerning our company has been revealed. For this reason, I would like to request to any measures have been taken to remove this information from the website.
This information includes very important data concerning our company. Revealing this information may have a negative influence on the security of the highly qualified staff from our factory. It can contribute to many dangerous situations as regards our activity in the other countries. Furthermore, a reputation of our director can be diminished.
Your positive attitude to this situation could give us some benefits regarding financial support from the government. Please, take into account checking of your website program to help us to deal with this problem.
I looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully.
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Formal letter - please help me to imporve my writing skills
Dear Sir,I am writing in regards to some an incident which has recently taken place on the Internet. Some sensitive information concerning our company has been revealed. For this reason, I would like to request to any measures have been be taken to remove this information from the your website.
This information includes very important data concerning our company. Revealing this information may have a negative influence impact on the security of the highly qualified staff from in our factory. It can could contribute to many dangerous situations as in regards to our activities in the other countries. Furthermore, a the reputation of our director can could be diminished.
Your positive attitude attention to this situation could give us some benefits regarding financial support from the government. Please, take into account checking of review your website program to help us to deal with this problem.
I looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully.
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