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Friday was a man that Robinson Crusoe saved from the cannibals. Robinson called him Friday because that was the day that he saved him. Before Friday was eating human flesh but then Robinson taught him to eat things like corn and bread. Robinson describes Friday as a handsome person , perfectly well made , with straight , strong limbs not too large , tall , well-shaped and about 26 years of age. The color of his skin was very tawny. Friday had something agreeable that not easy to describe. Friday was a faithful , loving sincere servant to Robinson and he was able to do all the work for Robinson. He worked hard and cheerfully in agriculture. Robinson taught him how to speak the language and he started to understand the names of almost everything. Friday came from a nation that eats men and Robinson wanted to convert him to Christianity so he started to ask a lots of questions about devil and God. Then Friday become a Protestant. He had been taught how to shoot , Navigation and he become an expert sailor. Friday was very attached to Robinson and he wouldn't come back to his home without him. He was a lusty , strong fellow but even though he was afraid to kill people in the beginning. Also he was an interpreter to Robinson with the Spaniard and his father

The Twenty-First century has witnessed enormous development that has been greatly significant [add here what it has been significant to]. Thanks to the technology, many people believe that it gives them more free time than in the past. Although I believe that the state of art technology has made our life much easier and saves us more time, to agree or disagree with this statement depends on several factors. Modern society has become characterized by creating technology that has had a major impact on our lives in several ways. For instance, the progress of transportation systems makes it easier for workers to travel, as well as a large number of them having their own cars. Consequently, workers spend less time commuting to their work places than in the past. Additionally, nowadays many people people are able to work from home online. The majority of companies use computers to collect and save important data and which they can easily restore. All the previous factors explain why technology has saved us more free time. Granted, it could be argued that the revolution of technology we witnessed has accompanied by economic inflation. Many people describe the current era as a materialistic life. In some places, many people have to work extra time in order to increase their monthly income and to meet the current challenge. Therefore, they have just little free time to spend with their families and friends. In contrast, it is agreed that the modern technology has a beneficial influence on those people who have well-paid jobs. To conclude, the recent technology has a positive impact on our life. However, the effect it has on people's free time could vary for several reasons, as previously mentioned.

Great work. The one big thing I would change is your use of connectors. Using words like "Additionally", "Therefore", "Conseqently" are all great but when you use them at the start of most sentencea it becomes too much.

ممتاز. انا اصفة انه هذا من الاسيوع الماضي. ما شفتها حتى هلق!

I want to improve my English skills. Unfortunately, I am very slow at speaking but I'm tired of just reading tips for learning English. Now I want to do some thing more. I hope to spend a little bit every day for practicing. This writing is about learning but in my next writing I will choose a more interesting topic. I need to talk with you.

My name is Mohamed. I have recently received a bachelor's degree in Commerce from X University. In my last year of college I pursued an accounting specialization in accounting sciencd. While I did love accounting science, I always knew that I would need to do something practical, so right out of college I got a job doing "X". I managed to gain a lot of experience there and learn more about my chosen field. That's where I really developed my teamwork skills and learned more about practical accounting in the labor market. I think that my skills in combination with my experience make me a great candidate for a position on your team. I hope that I will be able to demonstrate that for you today. does this sound natural?

Wow, great job! Sounds very natural. I tweaked a few sentences to make them flow a bit better and sound more advanced but over all great job! ممتاز!