When we were <strike>in the</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">at</font> Tokyo Disney Resort
My friend and I went to <strike>the</strike> Tokyo <font style="background-color: yellow;">Disney</font> Resort last weekend.
We took the express train (which <font style="background-color: yellow;">is</font> called Shinkansen) from Osaka to Tokyo and the local train to TDR.
We decided to go to <strike>the</strike> TDL first because the weather forecast said it would be rainy these two days but heavier on Sunday.
We wanted to see <strike>the</strike> Cinderella castle clearly, that's why we went to <strike>the</strike> TDL first.
As the weather forecast said, it was raining around noon but it stopped right after we finished <font style="background-color: yellow;">visiting</font> the attraction.
We were like, "How lucky we are!" "Rather I can see the sun!" ? (<font style="background-color: yellow;">Finally</font> I can see the sun)
Moreover, it was <font style="background-color: yellow;">a </font>hot day after <font style="background-color: yellow;">it</font> stopped raining.
We were very happy and playful. <font style="background-color: yellow;">excited</font> (normally we say in a playful mood)
We enjoyed till <font style="background-color: yellow;">closing time</font> and went back to the hotel to sleep.
Next day, we went to <strike>the </strike>TDS.
It <font style="background-color: yellow;">was</font> supposed to be rainy but actually it was cloudy a <font style="background-color: yellow;">whole</font> day.
I <font style="background-color: yellow;">prefer</font> <strike>like</strike> the TDS atractions<strike> more</strike> because <strike>there</strike> <strike>are</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">they were</font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">more</font> exciting and bit <font style="background-color: yellow;">thrilling</font> <strike>attractions</strike> <strike>more</strike> than TDL.
There <strike>is</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">was</font> also <font style="background-color: yellow;">a</font> very different atmosphere <strike>in</strike> <strike>the</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">at</font> TDS.
We were on a paradise <strike>at</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">from</font> the beginning <font style="background-color: yellow;">to the</font> end.
However <font style="background-color: yellow;">at</font> first we<strike> have</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">had</font> to get out <font style="background-color: yellow;">of </font><strike>from</strike> the paradise.
It can't be long enough <font style="background-color: yellow;">We didn't have enough time</font> to see sweet dreams, but I am really happy to come back to <strike>the</strike> TDR again because <strike>it was after 5 years</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">5 years have passed </font>since I went there last time, and it was <strike>still</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">only</font> my 3rd time to be there.
This <strike>our</strike> trip, we had kind of luck for the weather <font style="background-color: yellow;">were lucky with the weather.</font>
I don't know <strike>would</strike> that <font style="background-color: yellow;">would be the same</font> next time. haha
Thank you for reading.
Please check my sentence!!
TDS: I assume it's a name of a place like Tokyo, you go to Tokyo but not go to the Tokyo.
Typing mistake: After . or , please allow one spacebar. For example: That is good. I'd like to come back, and see you again. Not like this: That is good.I'd like to come back,and see you again.