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    Please help me to check this IELTS writing, please!! thank you ! The charts illustrate what graduates and postgraduates in the UK did after leaving college in 2008. In the first graph, we can see that the number of graduates who worked as a volunteer is the lowest, which is 3,500 graduate students, while the number of the graduates who studied further is the highest, which is 29,665 graduate students. Also, we can find out there are 16,235 graduates who were unemployed after college and the number is similar to the number of graduates who worked part-time job, which is 17,735. In the second graph, it shows that 2,725 postgraduates pursued a higher education, while only 345 postgraduates did voluntary work. Compared two charts, most graduates and postgraduates studied further after finishing their courses and only a small number of both group students did voluntary work. The third number of each group is unemployment. The only difference between two graphs is that the percentage of postgraduates who found a part-time job is higher then the graduates.
    March 1, 2018
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    大家好! Please check my text and correct the mistakes (tried to use 当 as "'work as'')

    当记者的时候 身为一位记者,他能跟很多演员见面。
    因为他有最好的管理的看法,他做生意真 很成功。
    我父母劝了我选择律师这个职业,但是最后我成为一名翻译。
    当导游很有意思,这种职业的人可以跟很多外国人见面。
    这位作家的小说我在纽约客杂志上看过。
    尽管我的汉语水平不行,我还是看懂这篇文章的重点。
    无论如何她都不想当售货员。
    下次 半場的表演非常精彩,观众鼓掌了三十分钟。
    著名的作家斯蒂芬金本来是位英语文学老师。
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    February 15, 2018
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  • Corrected

    中国的一周字  二零一八年二月五日 (第四个)

    比较 Bǐjǐao to compare
    比如 Bǐrú for example
    为了 Wèile for the sake of; in order to
    关于 Guānyú about; with regard to
    或者 Huòzhě perhaps; maybe; or
    重要 Zhòngyào important
    意见 Yìjiàn idea; viewpoint; opinion; complaint
    危险 Wēixiǎn dangerous

    西方人常常把中文和日本语做比较,但是他们很不同。
    Xīfāng rén chángcháng bǎ zhōngwén hé rìběnyǔ bǐjǐao, dànshì tāmen hěn bùtóng.
    Westerns often compare Chinese to Japanese. However, they are very different.

    他很喜欢运动。比如游泳,打篮球和橄榄球。
    Tā hěn xǐhuān yùndòng. Bǐrú yóuyǒng lánqíu hé gǎnlǎnqíu.
    He really likes sports. Such as swimming, basketball and rugby.

    为了减肥,她现在不吃巧克力。
    Wèile gǎnféi, tā xiànzài bù chī qìǎokèlì.
    In order to lose weight, she doesn't eat chocolate anymore.

    这部恐怖片关是于 是关于行尸走肉的僵尸(zombies)。
    Zhè bù kǒngbùpiàn shì guānyú xīngshízǒuròu de.
    This horror film is about zombies.

    他不知道他长大的时候 后想 要成为警察或者消防员。
    Tā bù zhīdào rúgǔo tā dà de shíhòu xiǎng chéngwèi jīngchá huòzhě xiāofāng yuán.
    He doesn't know whether he wants to become a police or a fireman when he's grows up.

    要是你在一座大城市近住 住在一座大城市, 学开車不重要。
    Yàoshì nǐ zài yī zuò dà chéngshì jìn zhù, xué kāi chē bù zhòngyào.
    If you live in a large city, learning to drive isn't important.

    春节是中国最重要的节日。
    Chūnjié shì zhōngguó de zhòngyào de jiérì.
    The Chinese new year is the most important festival in China.

    我妈妈总是附和我爸爸在政治上的意见。
    Wǒ māma zǒngshì fùhè wǒ bàba zhèngzhì de yìjiàn.
    My mother always goes along with my father's opinions on politics.

    澳大利亚有很多的危险的动物, 比如蜘蛛,蛇和蝎子。
    Aòdàlìyà yǒu hěn duō de wēixiǎn de yǔndòng, Bǐrú zhūzhī, shé hé xiēzi.
    Australia has a lot of dangerous animals, such as spiders, snakes and scorpions.
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    February 12, 2018
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    一個很特殊的聖誕節

    在本文裡,我將要描寫  要描述一下自己是如何過2017年聖誕節的,(the grammar is correct, but i think we don't write in this way.) 且短暫地  大致寫下我對本次十分特殊的聖誕節的感想。

    盡人皆知,傳統上中國人不過聖誕節。所以,毫無例外,每一位小學生、中學生、高中生、大學生及成年人都須上學或上班,使這個在西方人眼裡非常特殊的日子再平凡不過了。然而,對於這些人而言,聖誕節就是一個十分平凡的日子。所以這樣很正常:因這些人從未慶祝過聖誕節,所以對於他們而言,聖誕時上學或上班是十分正常的事情。然而,對於旅居於中國的外國人而言,聖誕節是我們最為重視的節日之一,所以不能放假,又不能和家人一起待著,對於我們而言是一件十分具有挑戰性而又使人鬱悶的事情。

    去中國求學之前,我知曉中國學期開始及結束的時間與西方的時間有所不同。西方大學的學期一般分為三個,從9月下旬至12月中旬、從1月上旬至3月下旬、從4月中旬至6月下旬。如此一來,我們就有足夠的時間與家人慶祝聖誕節及元旦,西方人最為注重的節日。然而,中國大學的學期一般分為兩個,從8月下旬至1月上旬、從3月上旬至6月上旬。如此一來,中國學生就有足夠的時間與家人慶祝春節,中國人最為注重之節日。

    當然這樣意味著我們西方的學生12月25日就要上課了。對於20餘年從來沒有在這個日子上過課的我而言,這是一個很大的打擊。因為在我心中聖誕節應該是一個非常快樂的時光,所以為了幫大家圖個樂,我打算在淘寶上買一件聖誕老人的服裝。

    屆時,早上起來之後,我立即換上聖誕老人的服裝,並or隨即 (i'm not sure what you wanted to say)將中文課本一把掃進書包裡面,開始準備出門。因為我從頭到尾穿著格外起來 奇特的衣服,所以我以為一路上都會有人盯著我看,心想:“這個老外在幹嘛呀?”,但從我宿舍至電梯的走廊上 但在我從宿舍走至電梯的這段路上,我幸好我一個人也沒有遇見到  遇見or遇到。電梯的門開了之後,我便走往 進裡面。隨後電梯裡的每一個人都抬頭看我,並且和我打了聲招呼:“聖誕節快樂!”。從宿舍至教室的路上也是如此,許多中國學生會戳一下身邊的人,隨後一聲噗嗤的笑聲便會傳過來。

    到了教室之後,我的同學們看到了我的衣服之後,皆笑了一下,使我覺得這是一件十分值得的事情。正如俗話所言:施比受有福,助人為快樂之本,讓大家笑一聲 能夠帶給大家歡樂讓我的心頭萌生一種暖洋洋的感覺。

    下方的圖片為我們班級的同學及老師一起拍的照片。大家看得出來我是哪一位嘛?
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    February 11, 2018
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    Please help me to check this IELTS writing, thank you!! The bar chart below gives information about the proportion of Australian man and women in different age groups who exercised regularly in 2010. Overall, the women who did physical activity regularly has the highest percentage at the age of 45 to 54. However, the percentage of the men fluctuated more than the women's, but the percentage at the age 65 and over of both two groups has close numbers. As we can see from the bar chart, the highest percentage is at 53.3% for the age 45 to 54 in the female groups, the lowest is at 47.1% for the age 65 and over. Compared with the male groups, the female groups is more steady. Looking at the male groups, there is the highest number at the age between 15 and 24, the number at the age 35 to 44 is the least, even less then 40%.
    February 10, 2018
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