Please help me to check this IELTS writing, please!! thank you ! The charts illustrate what graduates and postgraduates in the UK did after leaving college in 2008. In the first graph, we can see that the number of graduates who worked as a volunteer is the lowest, which is 3,500 graduate students, while the number of the graduates who studied further is the highest, which is 29,665 graduate students. Also, we can find out there are 16,235 graduates who were unemployed after college and the number is similar to the number of graduates who worked part-time job, which is 17,735. In the second graph, it shows that 2,725 postgraduates pursued a higher education, while only 345 postgraduates did voluntary work. Compared two charts, most graduates and postgraduates studied further after finishing their courses and only a small number of both group students did voluntary work. The third number of each group is unemployment. The only difference between two graphs is that the percentage of postgraduates who found a part-time job is higher then the graduates.