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Hello everybody,
My name is Séverine, I'm thirty four years old and I live in France. I'm learning English and Portuguese. I will like to go to work in Portugal next summer.
My favorite hobby is the biking. I also like traveling for to see the killer whales, dolphins and whales. and I like that.
See you soon.

It's not wrong, but learning a language happens over a period of time, so it is better to use a continious (imparfait) here.

IELTS Book 11 Test 4 Writing Task 2

Although numerous governments believe that their most crucial goal is making progress in economy, a number of people believe that making progress in other ways are also important for a country. In my opinion, economical progress is the most important problem for countries because of main concerns which are dealt by economics and the positive incomes of economical progress which affects directly other types of progress.
First of all, governments believe that their main objective is developing the economy. This idea is caused by the nature of economy. First humans formed up clans to provide security by moving together and sharing their resources. In time, humans' all needs changed but the main concern did not change. This concern is the distribution of resources in human society. Economy science deals with this problem. Therefore, when we mention about economical progress, we should think about obtaining and distributing resources. Making progress on economy is the base of modern society because without working on economical progress, resources cannot be managed. Consequently, resources can not be provided or distributed logically among health, education or other systems of government.

"Can not" is an acceptable spelling but tends to be used only when the not is part of another construction. As in : We can not only stand by and watch.

On the other hand, some people believe that progress on other systems is very important as well. Budgets should be prepared and tracked by government officials. Health, education, infrastructure system etc. should be developed equally.
Finally, in my opinion, with regard to positive results of economical progress, resources can be provided for other systems. Every governmental system has its distinctive budget. By making economical progress, their budget will be improved and eventually these system would be developed. For example, health system insurance is a system with a lot of requirements. A government should build hospitals, modernize them and should provide resources for researches which can be used applied in hospitals. These issues can only be handled due to making progress in economy. By solving economical issues and making progress, governments can provide requirements of health system and even step forward.
In conclusion, economical progress is a must for societies for fulfilling requirements for progress in other ways.

Small little nitpicks really,...
It is quite hard to follow your actual opinion, there is a lot of repetition of words and concepts. For example: some people believe that other systems are very important as well. All the information in this sentence has been given elsewhere already.

Still, your English is honestly really good.

It's so cold today.

Hi

IT'S ELEVEN O'CLOCK.

I WANT TO TALK ABOUT TODAY'S WEATHER.

WHEN I GOT OUT OF MY APARTMENT this morning, I FELT SO CHILLY AND COLD.

SO, I WENT BACK inside to take MY MUFFLER.

I also WORE A COAT FOR THE FIRST TIME IN THIS YEAR.

I THINK WINTER IS COMMING.

AT MY WORK, the HEATER WAS TURNED ON FOR THE FIRST TIME IN THIS YEAR.

I WAS turning A BLANKET OVER FOR WORKING. <- I'm not sure what you mean with this.

IT'S SO UNCOMFORTABLE to GO TO the TOILET IN WINTER.

Yet I still PREFER WINTER. TO SUMMER, because I hate bugs.

BECAUSE I HATE BUGS

I especially hate them especially a mosquitoes.

This summer, there weren't a lot of mosquitoes.

I think, it was too hot in this summer for mosquitoes are hard to live.

What a relief!

As this summer was tough for me, so it was tough for mosquitoes.

Anyway, I bought long padding for this winter several months ago, so i feel relieved.

I don't worry about freeze-up of Korea. <- What do you mean freeze-up of Korea?


Thanks for reading my notes.

Don't write in all caps, it is not correct.

all caps = LIKE THIS.

The day bebefore yesterday

I went to Misaki the day before yesterday. I used Tuna ticket. It includes a round trip train ticket, a bus fare and a Tuna meal.
I used a tuna ticket, which included my trip from tokyo to misaki, a tuna based meal and an activity of choice.
I met my friend at 10 o'clock then we took a train and a bus to Misaki. We arrived there at noon. We ate Tuna sushi, it was delicious. But there was a family who was very noisy. A family has multiple people, but it is still concidered one thing, so there was a family but there were people.
After that, we went to shopping at a fish market where i bought Tuna. Then we took a bus to an before "aiueoy" use "an" Aquarium. The admission was included in the ticket. We saw a lot of fish and a dolphin getting fed by children. Before we went home, we watched dolphins and sea lions perform a show. They jumped and danced. They were very smart.
It was a good holiday so I felt refreshed.

At last は finaly, eventualy みたい。日本語で「とうとう」言うだと思う。
For example : After waiting for three hours, at last the train arrived.

Well done, some nice sentences here.
One thing you could do to improve from here is to string sentences together into more naratively interesting compounds.

例えば：We arrived at noon. We ate Tuna sushi. It was delicious. 成る We arived in Misaki at noon where we ate some delisious tuna sushi.

頑張ってください。

Hihi

How does my working process look like

Could you correct my mistakes please?
Thank you in advance!

What does my artistic process look like?

I have multiple ways of working on my ideas.

The first way is a gradual elaboration on a comming  common? idea.The second is painting on the canvas as and when the ideas come.
The way I elaborate on ideas is as follows:
The moment I catch the idea, I try to fix it in by making a sketch. Then I need to think about it. After being thinking about it long enough, I continue painting in colour. I look for the best way of expressing the idea through seeking the righ colour composition and mood of the future piece. Also if I my piece is required to be detailed I work on details separately.

All this preparational makes me confident and allows me to work free on my canvas. As my aim is expressing ideas, I need to follow some preparational sketches. But, in the end, the piece may not correspond directly to what I imagined it could be according to the sketch. While working on canvas I also follow my intuition.

I'm not sure what you mean by a "comming" idea. Spontanious? Common? In progress?