The day bebefore yesterday
I went to Misaki the day before yesterday. I used Tuna ticket. It was included round trip train tickets , bus fare and eat Tuna.
I met my friend at 10 o'clock then we took a train and a bus to Misaki. We arrived there at noon. We ate Tuna sushi. It was delicious. But there were a family who were very noisy.
After that we went to shopping at a fish market. I bought Tuna. Then took a bus to a Aqua museum. The admission was included in the ticket. We saw a lot of fish and a dolphin was got feed from children. At last we watched dolphins and sea lions performance show. They jumped and danced. They were very smart.
It was a good holiday so I refreshed.
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The day bebefore yesterday
I went to Misaki the day before yesterday. I used Tuna ticket. It includes a round trip train ticket, a bus fare and a Tuna meal.I used a tuna ticket, which included my trip from tokyo to misaki, a tuna based meal and an activity of choice.
I met my friend at 10 o'clock then we took a train and a bus to Misaki. We arrived there at noon. We ate Tuna sushi, it was delicious. But there was a family who was very noisy. A family has multiple people, but it is still concidered one thing, so there was a family but there were people.
After that, we went to shopping at a fish market where i bought Tuna. Then we took a bus to an before "aiueoy" use "an" Aquarium. The admission was included in the ticket. We saw a lot of fish and a dolphin getting fed by children. Before we went home, we watched dolphins and sea lions perform a show. They jumped and danced. They were very smart.
It was a good holiday so I felt refreshed.
At last は finaly, eventualy みたい。日本語で「とうとう」言うだと思う。
For example : After waiting for three hours, at last the train arrived.
Well done, some nice sentences here.
One thing you could do to improve from here is to string sentences together into more naratively interesting compounds.
例えば：We arrived at noon. We ate Tuna sushi. It was delicious. 成る We arived in Misaki at noon where we ate some delisious tuna sushi.
頑張ってください。
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