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0 votedJanuary 28, 20181Could someone please help me to check these sentences related to the medical field.Thanks in advance
I am trying to write some sentences related to the medical topic but I am not confident that they are grammatically correct so could someone please correct these sentences if there are any mistakes? Or maybe suggest other ways to express them better.
Thanks in advance
Here are the sentences below which I made them up:
1. As a result, she has been assisted for showering and mobility using a wheelchair.
2. Mrs Goldstein’ current medications include 5 mg of Oxycodone three times daily as needed for pain, and both 25 mg of Atacand Plus and 15 mg of Remeron taken once daily.
3. Could you please support and advise this patient regarding self-injection of insulin and safely dispose of a used needle is necessary.
4 His other medication includes Glucophage and Atrovastatin via oral and Norvomix insulin through injection type I diabetes. As well as this, Nexium and Omeprazole have been taking daily due to his long history of peptic ulcer.
5 Community services, such as Meals on Wheels and the Blue Nurses, will arrange her meal and provide her nursing needs. Apart from this, a social worker will help out with cleaning and shopping requirements.1. As a result, she is being assisted with showering and is using a wheelchair for mobility. <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(The way you have it seems to mean she is being assisted with showering by using a wheelchair which may be what you actually meant</font>)
2. Mrs Goldstein's include 5 mg of Oxycodone three times daily as needed for pain and 25 mg of AtacandPlus and 15 mg or Remeron once a day. (OR once daily)
3. .....and how to safely dispose of a used needle as necessary. OR ...and safe disposal of used needles as necessary.
4. His other medications include Glucophage and Atorvastatin orally and Norvomix insulin injections for type I diabetes<font style="background-color: yellow;"> (although this is still a bit confusing because it seems as though he is using the Atorvastatin because he has diabetes) <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> He is also taking Nexium and Omeprazole daily</font></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> due to (OR because of) his long history of peptic ulcers.</font>
5. .....arrange for her meals and provide for her nursing needs. Additionally, a social worker....
0 votedJanuary 28, 20182My live
My name is Val
I am thirth-fine is old
My job is analist finance
I like footbla, red good book, cinema. We beach today, my family. , sister older, brother. We hose near beach is good. Jonh my brother footbal e my mother speak book lunch, dad is slee the sand.
Thanks advwnce :)Great try! English can be hard. Here is how it might sound more naturally:
My life.
My name is Val.
I am thirty-five years old.
I am a financial analyst (or my job is finance)
I like football, reading good books, and movies. My family went to the beach today. (or My brother, older sister and I went to the beach today)
Our house by the beach is nice. My brother John played football and my mother spoke about a book at lunch. Dad is sleeping on the beach. (or maybe you meant: At lunch my brother John talked about football and my mom talked about a good book.)
Thanks in advance.
0 votedJanuary 28, 20181I'm a little confused about<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> diference</font> between: Live/life/lives
I think these words have different <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">use</font>
- Live it's verb or adjective
use:
I live in México and Julia<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> live's</font> in London
In <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">November my</font> friend Claudia and<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> me</font> watched the live concert of Ricky Martin
-life
use:
I love my life,<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> i'm</font> very happy
-lives it's plural:
Many<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> peoples</font> lost their lives in the tsunami.(Hi)
I'm a little confused about<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> the</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> </font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">difference between: live/life/lives. </font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 198, 156);">(you need to add an article here "the")</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">I think these words have different uses.</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 198, 156);"> (since "words" is plural, you need to agree with "uses" not "use")</font>
<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">I live in Mexico (<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 198, 156);">no accent</font>) and Julia lives in London. </font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 198, 156);"> (you have used the possessive "live's" just omit the " ' ")</font>
<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">In November, <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 198, 156);">(you need a comma here because "In November"can be omitted and the sentence will still make sense)</font> my friend Claudia and I</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 198, 156);"> (you were right to place the pronoun at the end but it is correct to say "I". Think of it as I go to a concert not Me go to a concert. The first way sounds right! The second way does not.) </font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">watched the live concert of Ricky Martin. </font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 198, 156);">(While technically correct, it would be more natural to say "watched Ricky Martin's live concert and here you need to use " ' " to show possession - it is Ricky Martin's concert)</font>
<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">Many people</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 198, 156);"> (people is already plural so the "s" is not necessary at the end. In English we don't change endings to agree like in French and Spanish red house, red houses vs. casa roja, casas rojas) </font>
<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 198, 156);">Remember too that "I live" is a short I sound and "live concert" is a long I sound )
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