My life

My name is Val.
I am thirthy-five years old
My job is finance analyst.
I like football, reading good books, cinema. We went to the beach today, my family; older sister, brother. We had a good house near the beach. John, my brother, played football and my mother made the lunch. Dad slept in the sand.

Thanks

Very well written!

My life

My name is Val.
I am thirty-nine years old.
My job is finance analyst. (or maybe "financial analyst")
I like football,  reading good books and cinema. My family have gone to the beach today, including my older sister and brother. We hope the nearby beach is good. John, my brother is playing football and my mother is talking, reading a book, and eating lunch. Dad is asleep in the sand.

My life

My name is Val.
I am thirth-five years old     (((Are you 35 or 39?)))
My job is finance analyst. 
I like football, reading good books and going to the cinema. My family, sister and older brother and I went to the beach today. We hope the nearby beach is good. John,  my brother played football and my mother is talking about a book and lunch.  Dad is sleeping on the sand.

Thanks in advance :)

My live

My name is Val
I am thirth-fine is old
My job is analist finance
I like footbla, red good book, cinema. We beach today, my family. , sister older, brother. We hose near beach is good. Jonh my brother footbal e my mother speak book lunch, dad is slee the sand.

Thanks advwnce :)

Great try! English can be hard. Here is how it might sound more naturally:

My life.

My name is Val.

I am thirty-five years old.

I am a financial analyst (or my job is finance)

I like football, reading good books, and movies.  My family went to the beach today.  (or My brother, older sister and I went to the beach today) 

Our house by the beach is nice.  My brother John played football and my mother spoke about a book at lunch.  Dad is sleeping on the beach.  (or maybe you meant: At lunch my brother John talked about football and my mom talked about a good book.)

Thanks in advance.

My life

My name is Val
I am thirty nine years  old
My job is of financial analyst
I like football, red good books, and cinema. We went on a beach today,along witb my family. , sister  and older, brother. I hope nearby  beach is good. my brother John is playing  football and my mother is talking , reading a book and having lunch, dad is sleeping on the sand.

Thanks advance :)