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Could someone please help me to check these sentences related to the medical field.Thanks in advance I am trying to write some sentences related to the medical topic but I am not confident that they are grammatically correct so could someone please correct these sentences if there are any mistakes? Or maybe suggest other ways to express them better. Thanks in advance Here are the sentences below which I made them up: 1. As a result, she has been assisted for showering and mobility using a wheelchair. 2. Mrs Goldstein’ current medications include 5 mg of Oxycodone three times daily as needed for pain, and both 25 mg of Atacand Plus and 15 mg of Remeron taken once daily. 3. Could you please support and advise this patient regarding self-injection of insulin and safely dispose of a used needle is necessary. 4 His other medication includes Glucophage and Atrovastatin via oral and Norvomix insulin through injection type I diabetes. As well as this, Nexium and Omeprazole have been taking daily due to his long history of peptic ulcer. 5 Community services, such as Meals on Wheels and the Blue Nurses, will arrange her meal and provide her nursing needs. Apart from this, a social worker will help out with cleaning and shopping requirements.

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Could someone please help me to check these sentences related to the medical field.Thanks in advance

I am trying to write some sentences related to the medical topic but I am not confident that they are grammatically correct so could someone please correct these sentences if there are any mistakes? Or maybe suggest other ways to express them better.

Thanks in advance

Here are the sentences below which I made them up:

1. As a result, she has been assisted for showering and mobility using a wheelchair.

2. Mrs Goldstein’ current medications include 5 mg of Oxycodone three times daily as needed for pain, and both 25 mg of Atacand Plus and 15 mg of Remeron taken once daily.

3. Could you please support and advise this patient regarding self-injection of insulin and safely dispose of a used needle is necessary.

4 His other medication includes Glucophage and Atrovastatin via oral and Norvomix insulin through injection type I diabetes. As well as this, Nexium and Omeprazole have been taking daily due to his long history of peptic ulcer.

5 Community services, such as Meals on Wheels and the Blue Nurses, will arrange her meal and provide her nursing needs. Apart from this, a social worker will help out with cleaning and shopping requirements.


1.  As a result, she is being assisted with showering and is using a wheelchair for mobility.  (The way you have it seems to mean she is being assisted with showering by using a wheelchair which may be what you actually meant)

2.  Mrs Goldstein's include 5 mg of Oxycodone three times daily as needed for pain and 25 mg of AtacandPlus and 15 mg or Remeron once a day.  (OR once daily)

3. .....and how to safely dispose of a used needle as necessary.  OR ...and safe disposal of used needles as necessary.   

4. His other medications include Glucophage and Atorvastatin orally and Norvomix insulin injections for type I diabetes (although this is still a bit confusing because it seems as though he is using the Atorvastatin because he has diabetes)  He is also taking Nexium and Omeprazole daily due to (OR  because of) his long history of peptic ulcers.

5.  .....arrange for her meals and provide for her nursing needs.  Additionally, a social worker....


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Could someone please help me to check these sentences related to the medical field.Thanks in advance

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