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- La lluvia Desde ayer, ha estado lluviando aquí. Esperaba que nevara, pero no hace bastante frío. Me levanté al sonido de la lluvia golpeando mi ventana. Qué pacífico. Me encantan las tormentas. Aquí, durante el invierno, no hay tormentas de lluvia porque usualmente hace demasiado frío. Cuando llueve (que no pasa a menudo), nunca truena. Hoy, tronó, pero no vi relámpago. Tengo que hacer tarea pero estoy viendo Death Note, pero no quiero. Por eso, escribí eso! Corrijanme si me equivoque o si algo que escribí suena raro. Gracias!February 11, 201841
- Corrijanme por favor :-) Pienso que voy en trineo con amigas luego. Estoy tan emocionado! Me gusta la nieve porque se puede hacer tantas cosas divertidas con ella. A mucha gente no le gusta cuando nieva porque es un pesado para quitar, pero eso no me importa! A veces la nieve se pone en las botas de nieve y eso no es bueno pero es algo con que se tiene que tratar. Usé unas palabras que nunca he usado antes. Corrijanme si me equivoque, por favor! Gracias!January 6, 201850
Why I don't like to write essays
Hi!
I wanted to write something to practise but I didin't didn't have a good subject.
Because of this, I am going to write about my difficult to write texts. difficulties with writing.
Yes, it has been a big problem since I was born.
When I was in the high school I suffered a lot, because we had to write many essays. We had to write about books, make reports about movies etc.
I've always hated to have to write essays.
Despite of I hate hating it, once I had to make pass a big test to earn a scholarship and my essay was so good that I got to study in the university without paying. To me it was a good achievement.
Honestly after this situation, I got to be more confident but I don't like to write yet. (1)
Sometimes I've written something I write things here, but I need to be inspired. If I am inspired the words come to my brain naturally and I get to conclude write my essay easily.
I thanks thank you in advance for the corrections.
(1) This sentence sounds awkward. I would say, "Since this situation, I have gotten more confident, but I still don't like to write."
Great job! I don't like writing either. With some practice you'll be writing English like a native speaker. :-)0 votedJanuary 5, 20181An Observation
I sat on a chair against facing a computer monitor. Before me there was only the monitor and a wall. My cat sat on another chair next to me. There was between me and it a half meter He/she was half a meter away. A On the floor above my neighbor was walking around over me. A On the floor below my neighbors were yelling at each other under me.
There It was quite quiet inside my flat, but there was some noise outside of my room. I stood up on the cold floor and walked to a the window. There was not anything nothing interesting in order to see it beyond the window through it. There was only a man walked walking across the street, a stray dog along in the street walking slowly to the butchers', and a pup who that was running for chasing his tail around.
---------------------------------------------------------------------Great observations! Cool thing to write about. Some things sounded weird but I tried to correct it as much as I can. Various sentences still sound awkward but it should sound a little better now.
0 votedJanuary 4, 20180Today's Journal
I'm doing a short-term internship program for a short-term, which of university's program for my university. What I feel thankful about the company I'm in now, it is because they don't give me crap ton of work; which that isin not productive and or educational to me. So they had were concerned that about how can I meaningfully spend my time there well. They concluded that they can let me work on my own project according to their production flow and system. Therefore, for the last 7 days I have needed to give them a speech regarding what I want to make. And finally, I got confirmation to that it would be okay to make the idea I've got. Fortunately and happily they was were all nodding happily and giving gave me very positive feedback. I am so happy to make be making my own project that. I'm so pleased to know be sure that I can spend productive and rewarding time productive and rewarding until 31th January 31st!!0 votedJanuary 4, 20180- Mis músicos favoritos Recentemente he estado escuchando mucha música latina. Principalmente escucho música trap (en inglés también), pero a veces prefiero el reggaetón. Yo diríá que mi músico favorito en este momento es Bad Bunny. Él es de Puerto Rico y me encantan toda su música. También, escucho Ozuna, Nicki Minaj, y Cardi B. A veces escucho la música de Lana del Rey y Rihanna, especialmente cuando me siento tranquilo.January 4, 201851
New Year's Wishes
Hi!! I hope you had a great New Year and if the first day of the year wasn't what you had expected, don't worry, you had have 364 days to make this year the best.
I would appreciate your corrections of this entry. I want to send this message to a friend:
"Thanks for your wishes :) I hope the same for you. May this year be full of achieved goals and new challenges that make you a better person and approach allow you to achieve your biggest dreams.
What are your New Year's goals?"
Thanks in advance! :)-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Very good, Cindy! There were a couple things that sounded a little awkward but in a normal conversation this would not sound bad. In the first correction, the tense was incorrect, because you are addressing someone that still has 364 days (presently). The last corrections were made because in English you cannot approach someone to something. Hopefully my corrections make sense! Great job!0 votedJanuary 4, 20181I am upset and discouraged
I am a little upset and discouraged this morning. I like learning English and I also like helping others. It will be is great to make progress together. So Because of this, I correct other's' short essays in English or Chinese every day. In That way we can both make progress. So there is no exception in this morning. This morning was no exception. But I am a little discouraged. I correct someone's essay, I don't get thanks but a thumbs down. I don't want to be sensitive, but it is truely truly discouraging. If I correct it wrong or make mistakes, you can tell me or we can discuss. I don't think it is polite to give a thumbs down for others who just want to be helpful. Anyway, I hope I can be excellent in at English for the new year. And then I can do a better job on correcting essays.It is my first time receive receiving a thumbs down for helping others. Sigh........
I need to do my study now. Goodbye.
Have a nice day everyone! Everyone !
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------I'm sorry to hear that, Iris! I agree with you, this is a community in which we need to work together to help one another. By correcting other people's work, you are helping them learn. You deserve to be thanked! Don't get discouraged because someone didn't like what you had to say. If they do not accept your input, they are the one missing out on precious knowledge! Your English is clearly very good. Everything made sense, just a couple things sounded awkward. You'll be speaking like a native in no time! Until then, keep helping others, and thank you on behalf of the community!
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