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New Year's Wishes Hi!! I hope you had a great New Year and if the first day of the year wasn't what you had expected, don't worry, you had 364 days to make this year the best. I would appreciate your corrections of this entry. I want to send this message to a friend: "Thanks for your wishes :) I hope the same for you. May this year be full of achieved goals and new challenges that make you a better person and approach you to your biggest dreams. What are your New Year's goals?" Thanks in advance! :)

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New Year's Wishes

Hi!! I hope you had a great New Year and if the first day of the year wasn't what you had expected, don't worry, you have 364 days to make this year the best.

I would appreciate your corrections of this entry. I want to send this message to a friend:

"Thanks for your wishes :) I hope the same for you. May this year be full of achieved goals and new challenges that make you a better person and bring you to your biggest dreams.
What are your New Year's goals?"

Thanks in advance! :)
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New Year's Wishes

Hi!! I hope you had a great New Year and if the first day of the year wasn't what you had expected, don't worry, you had have 364 days to make this year the best.

I would appreciate your corrections of this entry. I want to send this message to a friend:

"Thanks for your wishes :) I hope the same for you. May this year be full of achieved goals and new challenges that make you a better person and approach allow you to achieve your biggest dreams.
What are your New Year's goals?"

Thanks in advance! :)

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Very good, Cindy! There were a couple things that sounded a little awkward but in a normal conversation this would not sound bad. In the first correction, the tense was incorrect, because you are addressing someone that still has 364 days (presently). The last corrections were made because in English you cannot approach someone to something. Hopefully my corrections make sense! Great job!

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New Year's Wishes

Hi!! I hope you had a great New Year's and if the first day of the year wasn't what you had expected, don't worry, you hadve 364 days to make this year the best.

I would appreciate your corrections of this entry. I want to send this message to a friend:

"Thanks for your wishes :) I hope the same for you. May this year be full of achieved goals and new challenges that make you a better person and approach bring you closer to your biggest dreams.
What are your New Year's goals?"

Thanks in advance! :)
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perfect!

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