An email draft
This is an email that I am going to send to my fellow students. Could you please check its tone and expressions? Thank you.
Dear all,
I hope this email finds you well.
My name is XXX, and I serve as a student rep representing all the PhD students in Asian Studies this semester. My duty is to collect
feedback concerning your experiences studying and developing at our school and our university. Later, I will
advance forward your opinions to university staff, negotiate with them, and help tackle problems to benefit you more.
Therefore, if you feel like sharing ideas or bringing up questions about academic support, learning and research, pastoral support, facilities and community, or more, please contact me. Facebook contact (XXX), dropping me emails, or meeting in person, whichever suits you will be great!
Thank you for reading and good luck with your semester!
Best wishes,
XXX