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Hi, I'm Ariel! I live in Tokyo. I began my career at an international consulting film several years ago. My job is to solve the issue with my clients in financial institutions. Recently, most of my clients are Japanese people and I don't have an opportunity so much to talk to people from different countries. I want to communicate with people around the world to enrich my life, please feel free to contact me! Actually, my English is still not so good, though... I want to be able to speak English more fluently. So, when I make a mistake, please correct it, If you don't mind. And I can support for learning Japanese if you like! Anyway, I am looking forward to communicating with you guys!
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    April 18, 2018
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    March 28, 2018
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    My diary: Why Japanese people like cherry blossoms? Cherry blossoms have started blooming in Tokyo. I got overtime work and finally got off work at 10:00 pm and then I saw many people on the way home, who enjoyed eating and drinking with friends or coworkers under the bloomed cherry blossoms. Since it was blue Monday, I just thought the reason why most Japanese people like cherry blossoms so much. First of all, it goes without saying that they are beautiful. Since they bloom for a very short period, they are often linked to the fragility of human life. They remind us how beautiful life can be and the importance of each moment that we experience. Furthermore, there are many people who reach a turning point of their lives in this season. Because Japan holds graduation ceremonies at the end of March and the new school year starts in April. Japanese companies also start their new business years. So cherry blossoms make people think of new beginnings. Even if people don’t have any changes in their lives, they would remember themselves who survived the last turning point, such as taking an entrance exam, getting a job, and parting with friends. They would appreciate that they owe what they are to what they were and then would be motivated to do what they should do. To conclude, I think seeing cherry blossoms is to celebrate our new beginnings after looking back the way that we chose. The cherry blossoms stand from the summer heat to the winter cold in Japan and then bloom for a short period in the spring. So Japanese people must compare ups and downs of their lives with the cherry blossoms. The beautiful cherry blossoms may symbolize our happiness or success, and seeing them encourage us to keep going on the way which we believed in. The following is a picture of cherry blossoms along the Meguro River. How beautiful they are!
    March 27, 2018
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    大勢の外国人が来るようになり、日本は案内表示の多言語化だけではなく、宗教に対しても尊重するようになってきたらしい。だから、イスラム教徒だけ親しみやすい環境を作るというわけではない。2020年の東京オリンピックのホストとして日本はどこでものどんな国からの観光客をも受け入れる影響環境を作るため、さらにムスリムフレンドリになって来ていて、ムスリムの観光客が増えて続けるわけだ。確かに、世界中の環境観光客に尊敬を表さないず、オリンピックのホストとしてなる国はないが、。東京オリンピックの後に日本のムスリム観光客が伸びていくともうためことも想定し、日本はさらにムスリムーフレンドリーというな環境を作ってり続ける。


    Hi, Maru! Thank you for sharing the interesting theme with us! I hope we will build a good environment to live comfortably for people around the world. (*^-^*)/

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    March 23, 2018
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    ムスリムーフレンドリー日本!(書き言葉で描書いて見ました)(*1)

    初めて日本へを訪ねた時に最も感動したことは日本のムスリムーフレインドリの広さに違いない。ムスリムーフレインドリというのはイスラム教徒のため、親しみやすい環境を作ることだ。日本へ旅行する前に、一日に5回お祈りをして、ハラールという食べ物しか食べない私は、住む場所自宅にいないうちい時に、お祈りの時間が来るとすれば場合適当なお祈り場所を探すことはやはり大変難しくなるような気がしていた。確かに、日本のイスラム教を信仰している個人がは結構(suggestion:かなり more natural)少ないが、ハラールという食べ物を与える提供するレストランを始め、空港や浅草さえにもムスリム向けのお祈り場所はが最近の日本にあることに気がついた。では、この少しずつイスラム教がなるべくわかる日本のことイスラム教への理解は周りのイスラム教を信仰している国からの観光客をが影響を与えたのだろうか。

    図一の棒グラフは日本政府日本せいふ観光客局が2015年に行った2011年から2015年までにマレーシアとインドネシアから来たの日本への観光客についての調査結果を表したものだ。

    図一から、4年間の間に日本のマレーシア人とインドネシア人の環境観光客が増えて続けるたということが分かる。この図によると、2011年の数とくらべ、に八万人の日本に行ったであったマレーシア人は2015年に三十万人となっている。一方で、インドネシアからの観光客は六万人から三十万人となっている。それぞれの国からの観光客が増えたが、インドネシア人の方は2014年から2015年までで約二倍になっており、最も大きく伸びたことですている。

    (*1) If you want to say that you draw a picture, you can use "描く". But If you want to say that you write letters, you can use "書く".
    (*2) When you write numbers, you should write all numbers in numbers or you should write all numbers in kanji.

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    March 23, 2018
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    My diary: Learning languages I think that languages are one of tools which I can communicate with others, put my thoughts into words, and shape my thoughts. As I get older, I have come to understand several different ways to express something in Japanese. Just like many other people, I learned lots of words through education and understood the meaning of those words through my own experience. Recently, I have tried to express what I’m feeling without making it sound too much of an overused phrase kind of “never give up.” Actually, using a phrase is an effective way to communicate with others. However, since I’ve heard phrases so many times, they don’t really hit me deep anymore. I also think if I neglect efforts to think things by myself due to using phrases, it would diminish my ability to think. That's why I try to let out what's floating in my head in my own words (when I express things in Japanese). Meanwhile, I have a lot of phrases which I have to learn in English. Sometimes I find some English phrases which don’t have appropriate Japanese expressions and vice versa. I mean I find the new expressions and when I want to use the expressions, it makes me think more deeply. So learning languages are to find the way to express my feelings and deepen my thoughts.
    March 23, 2018
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    Please correct a birthday message for my friend. Since I'd like to send a birthday message to my friend, who is a girl and is living in other country, please correct the following message. ------------------------------------------------------------- Happy birthday! I'm pretty sure you thought that I made a mistake about your birth day, right? No, I wanted to surprise you. I know your birth day is March 5th and that time you have a plan to go on a trip to Paris! We couldn't find time to talk from the new year to the present day, thus I just wanted to give you words of congratulations first of all. I am not being driven by Facebook’s notification and I wanted to express about I am thinking about you. That’s why I send you this message earlier than your birth day. - Take care of your health. - Just follow that heart and keep smiling. - Spend time on what you really want to do. - Try whatever you want without being afraid of failure. - No matter what happens, I know you can do it. You will be fine. Everything is going to be okay. - No matter when you are frustrated, disappointed and discouraged, I will smile you. - I’m believing in you.
    March 2, 2018
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    February 22, 2018
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    My diary: Today’s snacks are chocolate and Purple smoothie! Today is in the middle of this week. I was a little tired at work and then I found snacks which made me feel better in order to survive this week. I enjoyed chocolate with buttery toffee crunch, while drinking Purple smoothie. Since the chocolate was made in a Hawaiian confectionery company, it reminded me that I swam with wild dolphins in North Shore Oahu the summer before last. The Purple smoothie consisted of grapes, berries, and purple sweet potatoes. Since it was rich in dietary fiber and iron, I could take the essential nutrients which aid digestion and make my blood. When I am busy and can’t take a balanced meal, I make it a habit to supply nutrients that I tend to lack through vegetable juice. Vegetable juice is capable of easily taking the quantity of nutrition which are required each day for a healthy life. It is necessary to keep in mind that I drink juice which contains iron, because I have experiences that I fainted from anemia on my way to work on a subway train a few times in my life. Anyway, today’s snacks helped me with both my physical and mental health. I’ll do my best tomorrow! The following is a picture of today’s snacks.
    February 21, 2018
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    Genki 1, p. 246 Ex. VIIIA #17-21

    Please correct these few sentences. I really appreciate the help!

    17。トムさんは船で南極へ行きます。
    18。二ヶ月ぐらい行きます。
    19。どこに泊まるのかはまだ知りません(*1)。
    20。南極でペンギンと写真を撮るつもりです。
    21。たけしさんは今年の冬休みにどこにも行くつもりじゃない(*2)。

    (*1) Your sentence is grammatically correct.
            If you want to say that Tom was not informed of the place where he will be staying in  the Antarctic,
               you can say that "どこに泊まるのかは、まだ知りません。"
            Or if you want to say that Tom has not decided where to stay in the Antarctic yet,
               you can say that "どこに泊まるのかは、まだわかりません。" or "どこに泊まるのかは、決めていません。"

    (*2) Your sentence is grammatically correct.
            "~じゃない" is comparable to spoken language.
            If you want to express that in written language, you can say "どこにも行くつもりはない。"

    Hi, Eric! Since I couldn't find any mistakes, I'd like to give you additional information. I hope it would be useful in order to deepen comprehension of some words! Thank you! (*^-^*)/

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    February 19, 2018
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