Please correct a birthday message for my friend.
Since I'd like to send a birthday message to my friend, who is a girl and is living in other country, please correct the following message.
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Happy birthday!
I'm pretty sure you thought that I made a mistake about your birth day, right? No, I wanted to surprise you. I know your birth day is March 5th and that time you have a plan to go on a trip to Paris! We couldn't find time to talk from the new year to the present day, thus I just wanted to give you words of congratulations first of all. I am not being driven by Facebook’s notification and I wanted to express about I am thinking about you. That’s why I send you this message earlier than your birth day.
- Take care of your health.
- Just follow that heart and keep smiling.
- Spend time on what you really want to do.
- Try whatever you want without being afraid of failure.
- No matter what happens, I know you can do it. You will be fine. Everything is going to be okay.
- No matter when you are frustrated, disappointed and discouraged, I will smile you.
- I’m believing in you.
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Happy birthday!
- Take care of your health.
- Just follow that heart and keep smiling.
- Spend time on what you really want to do.
- Try whatever you want without being afraid of failure.
- No matter what happens, I know you can do it. You will be fine. Everything is going to be okay.
- Even when you are frustrated, disappointed and discouraged, I will smile you. << or: I'll smile for you even when you're down
- I believe in you.
A lovely birthday note! I'm sure uour friend will be happy to receive it.
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Please correct a birthday message for my friend.
Since I'd like to send a birthday message to my friend, a girl who lives abroad. Please correct the following message.-------------------------------------------------------------
Happy birthday!
I'm pretty sure you thought that I made a mistake about your birthday, right? Wrong! I wanted to surprise you. I know your birthday is March 5th and that time you plan to go on a trip to Paris! We couldn't find time to talk from the new year until now, so I just wanted to give you some words of congratulations first of all. I am not being driven by Facebook’s notification and I wanted to say that I am thinking about you. That’s why I send you this message earlier than your birthday.
- Take care of your health.
- Just follow your heart and keep smiling.
- Spend time on what you really want to do.
- Try whatever you want without being afraid of failure.
- No matter what happens, I know you can do it! You will be fine. Everything is going to be okay.
- Whenever you are frustrated, disappointed and discouraged, I will smile for you.
- I believe in you.
Very well written!
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