CURIOSITY ABOUT MY CITY

Hi! I will write curiosity about my city Sao Paulo.
It is known how land of the drizzle.
It is seventh city more populous the world.
The city have many restaurants and pubs, being that one third are pizzeria. By the way, the paulistanos are true worshippers of pizza: Sao Paulo is the second city that most consumer this dish. The second dish is the sushi.
Sao Paulo have the seventh worst transit on the planet. The paulistanos lose about 102 hours for year in the traffic.
It is consider the world capital of helicopters. (I wonder why?).
Sao Paulo have the most Japanese, Italian, Portuguese And Lebanese colony out side their respective countries.
Greetings from Brazil! Thank you!

CURIOSITY ABOUT MY CITY

Hi! I will tell you interesting things about my city Sao Paulo.
It is known as the land of the drizzle. 
It is seventh most populous city in the world.
The city has many restaurants and pubs. One third of them are pizzerias. By the way, the paulistanos are true worshippers of pizza: Sao Paulo is the second largest consumer of this dish. The second dish is the sushi.
Sao Paulo has the seventh worst transit on the planet. The paulistanos lose about 102 hours per year waiting in the traffic. 
It is consider the world capital of helicopters. (I wonder why?).
Sao Paulo has the most Japanese, Italian, Portuguese and Lebanese colonies outside their respective countries.
Greetings from Brazil! Thank you!

paulistanos : what does this mean?

I am Chinese

hello my name peter ,this is my English name,my Chinese name is Luo yuan tong .I want to make a fridends , I am students so l want you is student too.I am seventeen years old, and I hope to have a foreign friend about my age .

Hello my name Peter, this is my English name. My Chinese name is Luo Yuan Tong. I want to make a friends. I am a students so l want you is student too. I am seventeen years old, and I hope to have a foreign friend about my age.

你要写句子第一字幕一个大的字母。

I want you is student too. 你的意思是”我要认识一个学生。“妈？"I want to meet another student.

"The Gifted"

I finally finished watching "The Gifted" season 1. "The Gifted" is about the fight between people with superpowers, who are called mutants, and people who try to arrest mutants. All the mutants have interesting superpowers. Among them, the two main characters, teenagers who are siblings to each other, can release amazing power when they grab their hold each other's hands. Things weren't finished in season 1. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next next stories!

siblings to each other  There is no need to say 'to each other' because siblings already means that.

grab their hands : grab makes it sound like it was forced. As if the other person did not want to hold hands.

next stories : When you are talking about a story you can say 'what happens next' if you want to know the next part of a story.

Essay #189 "The Importance of Higher Education" 25.07.18

In our world, higher education has become, not an option, but rather life necessity, which can drastically affect people’s future. However, some people are able to achieve their goals in life without any education at all, thus, many people start to think that higher education is useless. In my opinion, itthis is not true, and every person needs higher education, which will have a very positive effect on their personal and working lives.

The first thing, is that the level of education is the major(a major [or] the primary) aspect which is considered on(in [or] during) a job interview, thus it is highly important for people’s careers. Despite the fact that many jobs are not complicated, and with a little training people could manage it, education is very important as it creates the basis for future development. In all job interviews I have done, the first question was about education and, basically, it could be the only question, as others are less relevant.

Another purpose of education is to develop people into well-educated and open-minded members of society. It helps to adoptencourage the main ideas of living in a community, and with education people gets gain the ability to improve and enhance it. For example, living in a developed society with higher educational standards makes people’s lives easier,. wWhile living in a community where people have barely schoollittle education can impede the progress of society and, therefore, badly affect individuals’ lives.

Lastly, all these examples about people being successful without any education are true, but also these situations are very rare. Thus, we cannot build the strategy of our lives just on these examples. People who have achieved their goals without any education are either enormously talented or very lucky. That is why people should not count on that and should ensure their future by hard working and getting a good education.

It seemed you used too many clauses. It did not sound natural with so many.

Discussing graphs: energy using

The first chart presents different ways in which energy is being spent on a regular Australian home and the second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas issued by each type of energy usage. It is possible to Notice that water heating consumes 30% of the total energy and is responsible for expelling the highest levels of greenhouse gas into the atmosphere. Heating is responsible for using 42% of energy and it emits 15% of the total greenhouse gas produced by energy consuming. Refrigeration spends uses about 7% of the energy and generates 14% of the total greenhouse gas, followed by lighting (8%) and cooling (3%). These last ones are the smallest when it comes to energy using usage and gas emissions. Other appliances present a total of energy using usage of 15% and gas emission of about 28%. We can see that water heating, air heating and the refrigerator are the main types of energy using usage and gas emission, which spend more energy and release more gases into the atmosphere.

GRE GMAT waiver reqoest

Thank you very much for your promt response for to my letters. I would kindly ask about would like to request a GRE/GMAT waiver. I have finished a bachelors degree from in finance and I also have significant record amount of quantitative experience in my previous academic records.