My special friend
I have a friend who is very outgoing and talktive.She is older than me 3 years old.She was my colleague.She had a lot work experienced than me. When I had trobles at work she always helped me. I also really like to talk with her because she is positive person,she can give me lots of suggestions about work,life.She always encouraged me keep going,never give up.That was a hard year for me to join company.I was very greatfull for her help.right now we still keep in touch each other.
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My special friend
I have a friend who is very outgoing and talkative. She is older than me by 3 years old. She was my colleague at .... She had a lot more work experienced than me. When I had trobles at work she always helped me. I also really like to talk with her because she is positive person, and she can give me lots of suggestions about work and life. She always encouraged me to keep going and never give up. That was a hard year for me to join the company. I was very greatfull for her help. right now We still keep in touch each other.Good job. Most of the mistakes were linking words, and not adding a space between sentences. Adding why it was a hard year at the company, or what kind of troubles you had would have made this even better. Those details would make the story more realistic.
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My special friend
I have a friend who is very outgoing and talkative. She is older than me by three years old. She was my colleague. She has a lot more work experienced than me. When I had troubles at work, she always helped me. I also really like to talk with her because she is a positive person; she can give me lots of suggestions about work and life. She always encourages me to keep going and never give up. That It was a hard year for me to join the company. I was very greatful for her help. Right now, we still keep in touch with each other.
写得不错，Nancy！要注意英文的小词，英文语法需要的。有问题请别怕问 =)
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My special friend
I have a friend who is very outgoing and talkative. She is three years older than me. 3 years old. She was my colleague. She had more work experience a lot work experienced than me. When I had troubles at work, she always helped me. I also really like to talk with her because she is a positive person, she can give me lots of suggestions about work and life. She always encouraged me to keep going and never give up.That It was a hard year for me when I joined the to join company. I was very grateful greatful for her help and even right now, we still keep in touch with each other.0
nice english
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