In the first world, people live much more time longer than they lived fifty years ago and when they grow old they look like younger than people looked like many years ago.

There are several reasons to explain it. this:
Firstly, people have enough food to feed eat and children can grow because they have a good diet.
Secondly, the development of medicine has allowed ensured that many diseases have disappeared or have been controlled.
Thirdly, people have more free time to enjoy. Consequently this is good for their health.
On the other hand, there are other new diseases which are being caused because of due to our life style. Many people suffer from stress, depression and/or other mental illness. The rate of heart attacks have increased considerably and many more people suffer from some different types of cancer.
Another problem of this time is obesity. The most more people who are overweight, the most more people suffer diabetes or high blood pressure. Moreover almost fifty percent of our children are overweight. The two main causes of childhood obesity are two:
In the first place,  The reduction of the level of physical activities and the increased consumption of foods which are high in sugar and fat.
Mass Media says that Spain has the second highest life expectancy. From my personal point of view, a good public system of health has contributed to increased our life expectancy, but unfortunately this is changing due the increase in poverty and less investment in health by the government.
In conclusion, the progress in medicine and improvement in nutrition have allowed people live for longer, but as people grow older they face some illness which they didn’t suffer in the past, when they died younger.

Dear Anna,
How’s everything going?. Sorry hear that you have been ill. I hope you are feeling better.
I feel better but I’ve had some health problems like diarrhoea, and I was vomiting last Monday. This week I am very tired, but I am happy because I feel like my health is going to restore.
I'd like to know more about your brother’s new job. Where is he working? What is he doing for his company?
My family is ok, my husband and my son are healthy but I am worried about my mother because she has a bad cold and has been on antibiotics for a month, so she is weak.
I am studying English at Language School. I am very happy with my teacher because she is a very kind/nice and I really enjoy being in her class. I always try to attend the class despite being sick sometimes
I am very glad to hear that you are going to a conference in my town next month. I was thinking it would be great if you stayed at my home so we could see each other every day. My husband and my son would also enjoy spending time with you, and you won't have to pay for a hotel room.
Write back soon and let me know what do you think!
Well, that’s all for now. Take care!
Best wishes,
Isabel

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