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An informal email This is a homework for the Language School. Could someone correct it, please? Sorry for mistakes. Dear Anna, How’s everything going?. Sorry hear about you have been ill. I hope you are already well. I feel better but I’ve had some health problems like diarrhoea and I was vomiting last Monday. This week I am very tired but I am happy because I feel that my health is going to restore. I would like you told me anymore about your brother’s new job. Where is he working and what he is doing for that company. About my family is Ok, my husband and my soon have a good health but I am worried about my mother because she has a bad cold and he has had antibiotics for a month, so she is weak. About me, I am going to tell you that I am studying English at Language School. I am very happy with my teacher because she is a very nice woman and I am really enjoying with her class. I am always trying to attend the class despite I am sick sometime I am very happy to know you are going to a conference in my town next month. I was thinking it would be great if you stayed at home so we could see each other every day, also my husband and my son will enjoy a lot with you. Moreover you would not have to spend money in a hotel. Write back soon and let know what do you think about? Well, that’s all for now. Take care. Best wishes, Isabel

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Dear Anna,
How’s everything going?. Sorry hear that you have been ill. I hope you are feeling better.
I feel better but I’ve had some health problems like diarrhoea, and I was vomiting last Monday. This week I am very tired, but I am happy because I feel like my health is going to restore.
I'd like to know more about your brother’s new job. Where is he working? What is he doing for his company?
My family is ok, my husband and my son are healthy but I am worried about my mother because she has a bad cold and has been on antibiotics for a month, so she is weak.
I am studying English at Language School. I am very happy with my teacher because she is a very kind/nice and I really enjoy being in her class. I always try to attend the class despite being sick sometimes
I am very glad to hear that you are going to a conference in my town next month. I was thinking it would be great if you stayed at my home so we could see each other every day. My husband and my son would also enjoy spending time with you, and you won't have to pay for a hotel room.
Write back soon and let me know what do you think!
Well, that’s all for now. Take care!
Best wishes,
Isabel


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Dear Anna,

How’s everything going?. Sorry hear about you have been ill. I hope you are already well doing better.
I feel better but I’ve had some health problems like diarrhoea and I was vomiting last Monday. This week I am very tired but I am happy because I feel that my health is going to restore.
I would like you told me anymore Tell me more about your brother’s new job. Where is he working and what he is doing for that company.?
About My family is Ok, my husband and my soon have a good health but I am worried about my mother because she has a bad cold and she has had antibiotics for a month, so she is weak.
About me, I am going to tell you that I am studying English at Language School. I am very happy with my teacher because she is a very nice woman and I am really enjoying with her class. I am always trying to attend the class despite I am being sick sometimes.
I am very happy to know you are going to a conference in my town next month. I was thinking it would be great if you stayed at home so we could see each other every day,. also My husband and my son will enjoy a lot with seeing you. Moreover, and you would not have to spend money in on a hotel.
Write back soon and let me know what do you think. about?
Well, that’s all for now. Take care.
Best wishes,
Isabel

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