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- I have read a news related to Twitter in which the company was fined $150 million by the Federal Trade Commission and the Justice Department. An allegation by the agancies is that Twitter did not give its users enough information associated with users' privacy. Specificallly, data collected from users are used to help marketers target ads but the company did not sufficient to say about this. (Please emend the above sentences to be more nicer! Thank you!)May 29, 202251
セビージャ
私はセビージャ<strike>で</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">に</font>住んでいます。セビージャはとてもきれいな町です。<strike>町の中はこだいです</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">古い町並み（まちなみ）です<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">。</font></font>たくさんかいどうがあります。ゆめいなモニュメントはTorre del Oro. （金のとう）。金のとうは<strike>横の川です。金のとうの</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">川のとなりにあって、</font>後ろにはコンサートホールがあります。<strike>ここ</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">ほ<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">か</font></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">にも (ほかにも means the town also has)</font>とうぎゅ<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">う</font>じょうがあります。はるはセビージャが<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">より一層（means more than usual one; as it emphasizes the following word）</font>うつくし<strike>い</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">く</font>なります。オレンジの木<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">に</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">花が</font><strike>は</strike>さきます。<strike>オレンジの</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">それは</font><strike>花は白いと</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">白くて</font>小さいです。町にはあまいかおりが<strike>あります</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">ただよいます</font>。Thank you Rachel for correcting my English.
I'm interested in セビージャ. I guess you really love the place :)
0 votedNovember 29, 20171- What is your favorite pastime? The most favorite pastime is strolling along the river near my place. I often go out in evening and think of the day's events. One day that I had been angry, to take it all in I just relaxed and took a look back about what were facts and what was right, while walking. Another day that I had been pleased, I basked in the afterglow. By the way, walking has its benefit for keeping good spirits. What is your favorite pastime?November 28, 201780
- What I'll do today, the day off! I have a plan to go to a book shop where I would spend my time to take a glance at a lot of books I'll be interested, as a favorite pastime today. Some shops are sort of far from my own place, thus if I stop by big book stores, I'll have to use a metro. Umm.. sure no problem to go there by metro. I'm excited by the imagination to look for books related to businesses, novels both fiction and nonfiction, languages, magazines... I'll have fun, if you're prepared! Fun is here I think.November 22, 201730
COMMENT
As a brief summary,
you have been trying to suggest a solution to tackle with the problem associated with poor (or ultra poor) Colombian, which are indicated in the previous studies.
The reasons you picked up are unemployment, displacement and inequality in the Colombia. In particular, you have pointed out the opportunity difference between the rich and the poor, with one example safe birth control. In addition, you have mentioned the luck of government supports to farmers, craftmen and small companies.
The first solution is education policies to improve education quality in Colombia. With a example of Finland, you suggest that a fair opportunity to learn might reduce inequality.
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As my comment for the first solution part,
does this Finland evidence really support your statement? I think that it support the existence of some policies but doesn't support the causal impact of an education policy on the poor. It might be helpful to find an another evidence or to describe a story directly related to the causal relationship for reducing the poor people ratio if your genuine interest comes from it.
Good work by the way, take care!
0 votedNovember 3, 20170たんじょうび
皆さん、こんにちは！
今月17歳になります。誕生日は11月14日です。もうお母さんに誕生日のプレゼント<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">のことで</font><strike>をカウンセリング</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">相談</font>したいと思います。日本語のテキストとか服が欲しいです。
誕生日<strike>のために</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">なので</font>日本料理とケーキを食べに行きます。0 votedNovember 2, 20171数学を<strike>練習した</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(247, 173, 107);">学び始めた</font>ばかりです
数学を<strike>練習した</strike><font style="background-color: rgb(247, 173, 107);">学び始めた</font>ばかりです。数学はとても難しいです。全然わかりません！<font style="background-color: rgb(247, 173, 107);"> </font>数学が嫌いです。今から日本語を勉強します。日本語の勉強が大好きです。0 votedNovember 2, 20171- How can I explain the word "teriyaki"; Japanese love teriyaki chicken How can I explain the Japanese word "teriyaki". Teriyaki is a way of cooking in which a cook burns ("yaki" in Japanese) meat with salty-sweet sauce sometimes called teriyaki source. Teriyaki sauce is compounded of soy sauce and mirin (cooking sake/alcohol), and is a magic sauce which turns meat into one with gleaming surface ("teri" in Japanese).November 2, 201740
- Today's diary Today's diary (Please check the following sentences strictly!) The town has been getting the atmosphere of Halloween for recent days. Today, I tried to have a Halloween curry at my university's cafeteria. The curry roux was darker than an ordinary one, and spice topping had decorated the roux the surface of which was sparsely covered with the red color. On the rice, minced meat had become molded into the shape of a bat. By the way, I ate with no time to wait because I was very hungry :D.October 27, 201730
