American English Corrections

What Is Your Favorite Pastime?

My favorite pastime is strolling along the river near my place. I often go out in the evening and think about the day's events. Once when I was angry, I went for a stroll there and took it all in. I relaxed and took a look back on what the facts were and what was right, while walking. On another day, I was content, and basked in the afterglow. By the way, walking has its benefit for keeping your spirits up.

What is your favorite pastime?

What is your favorite pastime?

My favorite pastime is strolling along the river near my place. I often go out in the evening and think of the day's events. One day that I had been angry, I went for a walk to take it all in. I just relaxed and took a look back at  the facts and what was right. Another day that I had been pleased, I basked in the afterglow I enjoyed the sunset. By the way, walking has the benefit of keeping good spirits.

What is your favorite pastime?

My favorite pastime is listening to music, but I like walks, too.

What is your favorite pastime?

The most  My favorite pastime is strolling along the river near my place. I often go out in the evening and think of the day's events. One day that when I had been angry, I took a walk to take it all in I and just relaxed and took a look back about what were facts and what was right, while walking. Another day that I had been pleased, I basked in the afterglow (afterglow of what?). By the way, walking has its benefits for keeping good spirits.

What is your favorite pastime?


Hi.

Overall good, I had to rearrange your second sentence as having the 'while walking' at the very end seemed odd.  Also, when talking about the afterglow,  you should indicate what the afterglow is for.  I assume for the good day, so you could say something like, I basked in the afterglow of the great day.