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- I just realized that I forgot to post yesterday, and now I’m really disappointed. If I had posted for three more days, I could have gotten 10 points in my English class. I posted every day for one week out of the two, so I really hope I can at least get 5 points. From now on, I’ll make sure not to forget to post, and I’ll try to post as soon as it’s time.0 votedMay 5, 20250
- My favourite room in my house is the living room because it's a really comfortable place to hang out with my family. It’s is the largest room in the house. It has an L-shape with about 35 m2. The living room has a wooden window and balcony door face facing the street. The walls are painted light orange and the ceramic floor tile is light brown. The curtains are white. In On the left side of the living room there is a large bookshelf wall full of books and a nice sitting area with two comfortable sofas, a recliner, and a coffee table. In this area there is a television and a HI-FI music system. In On the right side, there’s a dining area with a big rectangular table, 8 chairs, and a cupboard. In this area there are some pictures made with puzzles, one of them with 10,000 pieces. There are also a computer and a printer on the table.0 votedNovember 19, 20171
- “Some teachers prefer the group study methods for their students while others prefer the individual learning method. Which one do you prefer? Discuss the benefits of group study and individual learning. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.” The study method is fundamental: It will follow a student throughout his life. Some teachers believe that the individual learning method is preferable; however, some of them argue that to study into in groups provides more benefices benefits. Several studies have been done about the advantages of collaborative learning. It is scientifically proven that students, placed into cooperative teams, achieve better goals. In particular, they develop several abilities about like collaboration, and sharing, discussing discussion and facing each other's (**are you missing a word here after other's? I am not sure what you could mean). On the Virginia Tech’s “Journal of Technology Education”, in 1995, was published a research study (or "paper") about the results of shared learning at university: according to that study, studying in groups increases critical thinking skills. Although many people believe that shared learning is better, someone (**someone means one only person) some thinks think that students have to study alone. First of all because, a student, trying to learning learn something individuallyon their own, is able to find the learning method more suitable for him. Everyone is different and this can contribute to increased self-confidence. An exam may be an incredible chance to test self-abilities. If he fails, it would be an excellent precious occasion opportunity to understand his mistakes and to find another, more efficient, method of learning. In my opinion this is fundamental in particular in the first years of school in particular. As far as I am concerned Personally, I prefer to study individually because sometimes studying in groups are is too confusing. It is not unusual that, into in a group, only a few persons people really work and others do not proactively engage themselves. Nevertheless, to increase a team's working’s working abilities is very important, because those skills are actually requested valued by companies and research teams.
**incredible chance
A better way to say this would a "valuable (or great) way". Chance implies "luck" is involved.
**precious means: characterized by feeling or showing fond affection for; "a cherished friend"; "children are precious"; "a treasured heirloom"
**commas in sentences
When I went to school I was taught that one way to know if a comma belongs is the sentence will still make sense if you remove the fragment of the sentence that you have commas around. That is why I removed the commas from this sentence:
In my opinion, this is fundamental, in particular in the first years of school. If you remove "this is fundamental" it seems like something is missing from the sentence. And if you add another comma after "in particular" it makes it too stilted or awkward.
0 votedOctober 30, 20171 - Memo03
To: sales man
From: Jane
Subject: meeting
It’s This is to inform you that we will hold on a meeting on this Friday, May 31, 2002, to analyze sales data and trends of sales. Everyone should make a monthly report for the meeting.
Please notice notify me in advance if you can’t cannot (**cannot is more formal) attend show up.
**show up
Would be more likely to be used after the fact "he did not show up at the meeting" and is an informal expression that you wouldn't likely see used in a business memo.
0 votedOctober 30, 20170 - Write your report The manager of a sport centre where you have been going for some time has asked you to write a report on what you see as the strenghts strengths and weaknesses of the centre and describing one or two improvements that could be made in order to attract new customers. INTRODUCTION The purpose of this report is to examine the strenghts strengths and weaknesses of this sport centre and try to find an alternative to improve the centre and make of this it a more attractive and competitive place. STRENGHTS Strengths AND WEAKNESSes As far as I am concerned, one of the strenghts strengths of this center is the position location. Most of the customers work in the center of the city and during their lunch time, they look forward to practise practising sport. For This reason, the nearness close proximity respect to their offices, is one of the most attractive points. However, at the same time, these kind of clients usually are young and smart people, who hope to find the modernst most modern equipments and services, which, in fact, that doen´t happend hasn't happened in your sport centre.
IMPROVEMENTS
I would suggest that, if you desire to increase the amount number of customers, you should buy save safe and trendy devices, which offer a better experience to the users. For example, the new bycicles bicycles mark show the calories burned, the distance, or even the frequency of your heartbeat. On the other hand In addition, personally I think that you could amplify increase the number of classes and teach less common sports, for instance, spinning, pilates, or not to mention the latin dance. These activities may attract more to the femenine female clientele public and will give bring a colorful atmosphere to the gym.
FINAL RECOMMENDATIONS
To sum up, if these recommendations will implement were to be implemented, the current situation is bound to improve. FindingBringing in new teachers and making a little small investment will not only will it attract more people, but will make the centre more popular. also the centre will be very popular.
0 votedOctober 30, 20171
